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"Bulma Runs Away" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: vegeta and future trunks [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2015 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I wish it was longer :( I can obviously see why bulma wanted to get away! It would have been more interesting if bulma didnt tell chichi where she was going, it would have made vegeta freak out even more lol. doesnt bother me if vegeta was out of character, i loved how he told bulma to "please dont leave him again" (awww) And then of course vegeta just has to be an ASS again and tell her an insult right after they had sex lmao Still very cute, funny story, loved the lemon too ;)
 Reviewed By: dbzfan  On: March 04, 2003 22:48 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice. very nice. Whoooo..and the first review too. I like you're style.

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