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Title: You are stupid
Reviewed By: Neko-Yugi On: June 01, 2005 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um........If this yaoi between Yuugi/Yami then why in the fucing seven hell's are you and Yami coupling???? Why do you put that he loves you like soooooo many insane author's your story's great in all but you luven an anime character ain't its just wrong! You need a new person to like or just don't put Yami's your's got that? Hopefuly you will get lost, Neko Yugi
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Reviewed By: Katmon =^.^= Ichijouji On: November 21, 2002 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Katmon: CONTINUE!! ...soon... ...onegai?...
Seiji: *smacks Katmon* You're such a three-yr-old!
Katmon: Am not! I just happen to like thos sorts of stories, and it looks like it didn't load all the way!
Seiji: Ya know, she's right, it does look like it didn't load all the way. It may just be this computer, though...
Ja!
Katmon =^.^=
Seiji!! |
Reviewed By: Kyouki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 17:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm.. "Meh" Got put into the wrong place.. AH WELL. -.0;; You can figure it out anyway.. I don't feel like reviewing twice but I guess I will out of extreme boredom... |
Reviewed By: Kyouki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm terribly sorry for stopping there but I'll write more as soon my muse and I(MEEEEH!!) come i contact with each other.
Dom: You're just lazy.
By the way, I'm talking to Pharaoh Yami on the phone and she's telling me what to write.. Otherwise you would have to wait until tomorrow for this review.. |
Reviewed By: DarkWitch On: November 14, 2002 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you meanie!!!! You stopped right when it was getting good!!!! I totally hate you!
Hurry it up pleez!! I'm going crazy!!!! *screams in frustration* |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: November 14, 2002 01:15 CST
Comment/Review:
WTF??!! WHAT!! HUH? WHY? HOw could you stop there? I want more! The Lemony Hentai goodness was just getting to the good part... you mean! ^_^ I wanna read more more more! Please! PLease! ^_~(Y+Y4EVER!) |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 17:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Were you planning to add a lemon?
If you are...
HOW DARE YOU STOP IN THE MIDDLE OF IT!!!! WRITE MORE RIGHT NOW!!!! OR I'LL HAVE YOUR BLOOD AND INTESTINES SACRIFICED TO THE SUGAR GOD!!!!
Yugi: *gulp* She means it you know
AND I DON'T GIVE A F*** IF IT DISRUPTS YOUR SOCIAL LIFE!!!
However... if you weren't planning a lemon, please do ignore that last statement. *giggles nervously* |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 10:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, think it's great even though I've only read the first chapter. Give me a break I'm in the middle of a computer lesson here at school here!!! *Yami shaking his head. Sam whacks him with a frying pan she magivally conjured up* Anyway carry on. Or Else |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 14:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
And I hate you as well. I like flames..so I guess I will spare you a horrible death..but you don't have to read it. Don't like it..stay the hell away. |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 14:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Malik will make an appearance..sometime..er.. |
Reviewed By: maliks gurl On: October 05, 2002 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
i liked it...altho, yami is a little out of character, but at the same time really in character...umm im not making any sense now am i...ill let u go
http://www.angelfire.com/weird2/yugiohfanfic!! |
Reviewed By: maliks gurl On: October 05, 2002 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
hehe...this is cute....i like it........dunno about any1 else, but i like it.....u gonna put malik in it?? |
Reviewed By: Kyouki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 14:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I love the story. If this account name is different from what I sign, just ignore it. I liked your story too much not to review. Yami and Yugi, that's one of my favorite would-be couples. Actually, I never thought of it before but I think it's cute. Yugi and Kaiba I have thought about though, they'd be cute together too. O_O; AHHH. -Stares off- Did Tea die in the show or just in your story? -Clings to Yugi and Yami Yugi- >>;; Mine!
Kyouki |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: October 04, 2002 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Haha, "I found it in my dining room." That's too funny. And Yaa-ami is jea-lous! ::snicker:: School and writer's block are the two biggest enemies of the fanfic author, but you're doing good! More, soon please! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami On: October 03, 2002 18:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well er..I should really login. Oh and about the age thing. Does it really matter that much? If it makes you feel any better..I'll change it to 18 and make him a senior..Thanks for pointing that out. I completely forgot that Yugi was a freshman. God..why do anime peoplies have to make the age so hard to tell? I mean..in SM, Usagi is like 14 and she looks 21. |
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