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Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 17:52 CDT
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Were you planning to add a lemon?
If you are...
HOW DARE YOU STOP IN THE MIDDLE OF IT!!!! WRITE MORE RIGHT NOW!!!! OR I'LL HAVE YOUR BLOOD AND INTESTINES SACRIFICED TO THE SUGAR GOD!!!!
Yugi: *gulp* She means it you know
AND I DON'T GIVE A F*** IF IT DISRUPTS YOUR SOCIAL LIFE!!!
However... if you weren't planning a lemon, please do ignore that last statement. *giggles nervously* |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 10:06 CDT
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Hi, think it's great even though I've only read the first chapter. Give me a break I'm in the middle of a computer lesson here at school here!!! *Yami shaking his head. Sam whacks him with a frying pan she magivally conjured up* Anyway carry on. Or Else |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 14:11 CDT
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And I hate you as well. I like flames..so I guess I will spare you a horrible death..but you don't have to read it. Don't like it..stay the hell away. |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 14:10 CDT
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Malik will make an appearance..sometime..er.. |
Reviewed By: maliks gurl On: October 05, 2002 16:37 CDT
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i liked it...altho, yami is a little out of character, but at the same time really in character...umm im not making any sense now am i...ill let u go
http://www.angelfire.com/weird2/yugiohfanfic!! |
Reviewed By: maliks gurl On: October 05, 2002 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
hehe...this is cute....i like it........dunno about any1 else, but i like it.....u gonna put malik in it?? |
Reviewed By: Kyouki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 14:09 CDT
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Hey, I love the story. If this account name is different from what I sign, just ignore it. I liked your story too much not to review. Yami and Yugi, that's one of my favorite would-be couples. Actually, I never thought of it before but I think it's cute. Yugi and Kaiba I have thought about though, they'd be cute together too. O_O; AHHH. -Stares off- Did Tea die in the show or just in your story? -Clings to Yugi and Yami Yugi- >>;; Mine!
Kyouki |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: October 04, 2002 12:55 CDT
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Haha, "I found it in my dining room." That's too funny. And Yaa-ami is jea-lous! ::snicker:: School and writer's block are the two biggest enemies of the fanfic author, but you're doing good! More, soon please! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami On: October 03, 2002 18:28 CDT
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Well er..I should really login. Oh and about the age thing. Does it really matter that much? If it makes you feel any better..I'll change it to 18 and make him a senior..Thanks for pointing that out. I completely forgot that Yugi was a freshman. God..why do anime peoplies have to make the age so hard to tell? I mean..in SM, Usagi is like 14 and she looks 21. |
Reviewed By: ryoubakurafan013 On: October 03, 2002 18:20 CDT
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Ok, just one thing wrong with this... In the show, Yugi's 15. How can this be 3 years after the show? That'd make him 18! Otherwise, it's good. Bye! |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: October 01, 2002 17:49 CDT
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Xpnye and I really like this story (and not to say we're the authorities on this type of stuff) but we're kinda picky when it comes to fics, so you can consider it a huge compliment that we like it so much. Have you thought of posting on Fanfiction.net? I know they recently banned NC-17, but hentai authors like Xpyne and myself ::snicker:: just ignore it and post in R. I was thinking you might want to post at FF.net because only three comments is sad. I can guarantee that you'd get a MUCH better response on FF.net. I don't know if it's because more people go there, or if it's because we're a more tightly-knit group of authoresses (I don't think any guys would want to write about other guys getting it on, but you neer know...), but people are much more forthcoming with reviews, and it's much more gratifying ^_~ Just thought I'd let you know. Please continue your story! |
Reviewed By: Solitaire and Xpyne On: September 29, 2002 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Xpyne: Hey there. Heeheehee. '"Screw this". Goes into his soul room to change.' That's how I feel every morning.
Solitsire: I really liked your story! I'm looking forward to the aluded Yami/Seto. ^_~
Xpyne: I like your characterization of everybody. Very cute. But where the butter did the puzzle go?? And why did that chick say she was Anzu, but...she didn't look like Tea. You are aware that Anzu is Tea's Japanese name?
Solitaire: Yeah, that one confused the hell out of *me* that first time I ever read a Yugioh fic. But great work! What happens next??
Xpyne: I like. You write more. Me happy. |
Reviewed By: Shooting star6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just learning Html tags. Great start. You now have two reviews so continue. |
Reviewed By: Zarra Rous On: September 27, 2002 04:46 CDT
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cute start... keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 13:27 CDT
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Heheee..I have thought of Seto and Yugi..but in the end..it will be *stops* Sorry, giving away the ending to my story. Anyway! No...Tea..lives on..*crowd sighs disappointed* Yes,yes I know. It sucks. She becomes Seto's girlfriend (NO!!!) But! That is why I write a fanfic..to kill her sorry ass. In case you noticed, her Jap name is Anzu..the evil lady in my story ^^ I have another bubble of motivation and inspiration so I might be able to continue chapter. Thankies for the good reviews! |
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