| "Tortured Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cypress On: November 28, 2002 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say I like the gore and angst. The fic is real orginal and the grammer is good just so you know your drawings are great. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for next chapter. Also those chapters weren't missing when I read them. |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 16:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel On: October 22, 2002 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! And very oringinal, too! A little gory...but you warned us about that, so I can't complian. I hope you get the next chapter up soon. |
Reviewed By: x . x On: October 21, 2002 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Uhhh, the bulk of this chapter (aafter Buu left)had little if any bearing on the story, if you are going to torture people, don't do it randomly. Make it have at least some bearing on the rest of the story. |
Reviewed By: The reviewer On: October 18, 2002 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent fic. Although you might want to proofread again, there were some minor errors. Very good overall and I find myself wondering what is going to happen without Piccolo to hold them together. Thats a really nice twist too, Alysa's second voice being dark and Buu's being good. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: October 21, 2002 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read all the chapters and that was sick. I want more!!! |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm only doing this so I can read my reviews. Don't know why I can't just read thing (shrug)
Buu qoute...
"I'm not going to fight you...I'm going to EAT YOU!" |
Reviewed By: condemned Hope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool chapter |
Reviewed By: {} On: October 15, 2002 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
chs 1, 6, and 8 are missing upon entry to the fanfic but can be accessed when moving on to the next ch.
wierd. |
Reviewed By: [] On: October 15, 2002 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I change my mind, the mom deserved death too.
Real good story here. Keep up the good work. You might want to proofread though, there were several minor gramatical errors. |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is gloria...the author.
Can anyone tell me if some of the chapters are missing on your end. I can't figure out if its just a problem with my settings, or if they really are missing.
If they are missing you can read them at Fanfiction.net
(shrug) |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
What do you (the reader)think should happen?
I'm just sending out feelers cause well...I'm curious:) |
Reviewed By: devilgurl170 On: October 13, 2002 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was brilliant, just brilliant. I loved every bit of it. *smiles* Buu's acting 'weriod' around Alysa. hehehe I think the story is great u should continue it. And I love your drawings they are really good. Do you think you could draw a picture of Brian? Just asking... |
Reviewed By: son pan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a very dark story and disgusting too *grins* good written really. some of the scenes even sickend ME and that's very rare. that's only one of the things that makesthis story so unique. it's also a very originalidea, because I've never read a story like this. and Buu is the main character here....and one more thing, I admire you because almost everyone would not dare to write a story like this and then post it. that's good.
(sorry about my bad english, i'm born in holland)
~*indira*~ |
Reviewed By: [] On: October 11, 2002 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, the son of a bitch deserves it, not to sure about the mom though... |
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