| "Tortured Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: condemned Hope [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool chapter |
Reviewed By: {} On: October 15, 2002 17:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
chs 1, 6, and 8 are missing upon entry to the fanfic but can be accessed when moving on to the next ch.
wierd. |
Reviewed By: [] On: October 15, 2002 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I change my mind, the mom deserved death too.
Real good story here. Keep up the good work. You might want to proofread though, there were several minor gramatical errors. |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 09:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is gloria...the author.
Can anyone tell me if some of the chapters are missing on your end. I can't figure out if its just a problem with my settings, or if they really are missing.
If they are missing you can read them at Fanfiction.net
(shrug) |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
What do you (the reader)think should happen?
I'm just sending out feelers cause well...I'm curious:) |
Reviewed By: devilgurl170 On: October 13, 2002 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was brilliant, just brilliant. I loved every bit of it. *smiles* Buu's acting 'weriod' around Alysa. hehehe I think the story is great u should continue it. And I love your drawings they are really good. Do you think you could draw a picture of Brian? Just asking... |
Reviewed By: son pan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a very dark story and disgusting too *grins* good written really. some of the scenes even sickend ME and that's very rare. that's only one of the things that makesthis story so unique. it's also a very originalidea, because I've never read a story like this. and Buu is the main character here....and one more thing, I admire you because almost everyone would not dare to write a story like this and then post it. that's good.
(sorry about my bad english, i'm born in holland)
~*indira*~ |
Reviewed By: [] On: October 11, 2002 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, the son of a bitch deserves it, not to sure about the mom though... |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
don't annoy the crazy person |
Reviewed By: Misti-Kira109 On: October 07, 2002 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! *clapps happily around the room* I loved it! I lvoe all the gore and violence, I just plain loved it! *stops clapping and dancing lkike a maniac* Please do continue...:):):):)
:( :/ :\ :O :) |
Reviewed By: Calisaera On: October 06, 2002 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic! I absolutely love it!! You really have got to continue this. Your work is simply awesome in every way. I can't believe more people haven't read this!!! I need to read chapter 6!!!!! |
Reviewed By: The reviewer On: October 08, 2002 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If she has become like a robot and does not actually enjoy killing, but simply goes along with it, then hasn't Buu failed anyways? |
Reviewed By: christine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this keep writting more
:) |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! Very well written! |
Reviewed By: Tipola On: October 01, 2002 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. Get more mutilation this is just the stuff that everyone whants to see but that god damn fanamaition keep up the good work i cant wait for the next chapter |
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