Reviewed By: Jin On: October 09, 2002 17:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: EVIL! That is what I say about the end of chapter nine. EVIIIIIIIIIIL!!
I've been following this fic at fanfiction.net, and stumbled across it (and its new chapter) here. If someone told about the premise of the fic--"Yamato gets turned into a girl"--I most likely would have gone NO! and walked away, but I'm glad I went I found it the way I did. I love the way you write, and the way you're developing is the story is fun and interesting.
Hope to see the next chapter soon! |