Reviewed By: delusional_lady On: October 23, 2003 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me making 'awwwwww' sounds over and over again! Like that first chappie when Rukawa won the really huge bear for Kogure. Awwww! And he called it kaeru! They're being so sweet, it makes my eyes water! Really! Yay! Kogure dances! It's so fluff! I was practically melting in my seat when I read that part. And you also inserted a little SenKosh! Another yay! But what about the next chapter..? From your preview, it sounds a bit serious. I hope nothing bad happens.
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