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| "Alone Again" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: kanashii...
Reviewed By: rukawa_yumi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
T_T Sore no kanashii! Another fic that would cause my death! No more deaths and torture for Kaede, onegai... Demo, sugoi wa! I loved the flow of the story and the tragedy, it's to its superlative degree! I cried at the part where they all read Kaede's letter. Who wouldn't, anyway? It's just so tragic! And come to think of it, all my fave pairs are here - MitKo, RuHana, SenKosh, FujiHan... sugoi! Omae wa tensai, like Hana! Hope to read more from you! ^.^
| Title: Ü
Reviewed By: ||jayne|| On: November 02, 2003 09:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
style of writing: it is a 9 co'z the fic was well written. and understandable! umm.. i really can't explain it but its worth reading. i can say that i like the way you write. spelling & grammar: i didn't saw any mispelled words and the grammar is good! O/C: umm...i think i've read a lot of story like that but mostly it's hana who died and he didn't commit suicide (he died on an accident, etc.). EF:the fic is not boring but i dont ejonjoyed it by the reason that the story was so sad!!! OR: the fic is good and i like the way you write coz its undesrtandable! MY REACTION: waaahhh!!! this is a very sad fic *cries* hana can't do that!!! anyway, it's a nice fic! but next time please make it a happy ending!!! onegai!!! go ruhana... and hana-uke!!! gambatte on your next fic!!! (yeah! i'm sorry about my rating coz i really don't know how to write! i juz read fics that's why i'm not good on critisizing people's work!)
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