| "Substitute" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: sarsa On: March 30, 2005 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, hot dirty, nasty PWP. Just what I needed. Actually I really did enjoy it. Can't wait to read more of your stuff. Very impressed. and i loved the Aya twist. You are so mean.
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Reviewed By: Spawn of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh. what an original ending!!! couldn't have ended it better and frankly the ending is what gives your story its whole punch! i liked reading it!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jill On: October 11, 2002 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay this was so much fun! I loved the ending i laughed out loud!! Yesh, it was good ^^. |
Reviewed By: la blue kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. I loved how Yohji was talking to ken. (guess i'm sicker than I thought)
good job! |
