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"The Family Curse Arc" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 19, 2004 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a fun fiction. plz update soon!!

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 Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 19, 2004 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i havve real comments this time! (^_^) This is an interesting story and it'd be cool if you continued it. I kind wish there was more father/daughter interaction and that belt she got him from hot topic was great!! lol my favorite line is from chapter 2, when wuffie says " Onnas have been doing this since the beginning of time." Gahhh Wu makes us seem like dinosaurs, I was cracking up. sniff, there was no kissy face between Duo and Heero, but that's cool. maybe it's the Duo fanatic in me but it would be nice if Duo and Heero were involved a bit more or both/one of them put in a life altering/threatening situations on specifically them. I've seen them get hurt but indirectly-mostly in this story. I was wondering about the scars on Duo's wrists, we can glosed over that when he was battling himself on whether he should tell Faith. I think he should have talked to her, Duo normally puts others before himself, this should have been especailly the case with his daughter. I though it was cool taht the zero system was actually made for women (^_-), but I still think it's influencing Faith in a negitive way. (crosses fingers) maybe there will be a father daughter fight in the qundams, with Duo trying to get her to realize who she's fighting is not the enemy but family. sorry I talk a bit much (^_^), update soon

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 Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2004 21:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey cool story!! I've just begun to read it. But i have no comments yet.. I guess I just like to talk ^_^; ... i'll be back with a real review soon. Glad you are continuing it (^_^)

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