| "The Love of Two Women; The Heart of One Man" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rianna On: November 09, 2002 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
really good story. post more soon it was fun to read. |
Reviewed By: BusyBabyPrettyKitty On: November 05, 2002 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHH!!! TERRA SUCKS BALLS!!! Bulma is dumb. She didn't listen to what Juhachi said. tsk tsk...well, what about goku n chichi? u said like 1 thing about them. U should write more on them!! Oh and u shoulda made it be the FOOTBALL team not the SOCCER team b/c I can't imagine Vegeta playing soccer. LOL well I hope that you keep goin wit this fic because it's really good. ttfn |
Reviewed By: OMG! On: November 05, 2002 16:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow that's pretty damn good. U should write a chapter about G/cc though. Well the story is good.
PEACE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo...so Vegeta cares about Bulma's love eh?
CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: OMG!! On: November 04, 2002 13:45 CST
Comment/Review:
What did he see?!??!!!?!?! What was it that made him wish he was blind?!! He's not actually gonna believe Yamcha is he?!?! OMG you have to write more and update sooooooon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LC On: October 24, 2002 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, but if Bulma was a virgin, Vegeta wouldn't have "slid into her silky wetness" quite so easily. There's also be a hell of a lot of pain in the beginning. |
Reviewed By: Saphire13 On: October 23, 2002 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic!! I'm a really hard to please at stories. But this is an exeption!
I'm not just saying this to please you but I love this story! So please continue! |
Reviewed By: Who am I? I don't even know. I guess I'm just a hoe On: October 15, 2002 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was one great story. I can't believe I over looked it. I was reading you other stories, they were great! Jen you really do write very well. Good luck and please please please update! |
Reviewed By: The child that brings upon hell On: October 14, 2002 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter great work. keep it going. you're a great writer. |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 20:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHA Vegeta, tsk tsk..... That was great I nearly cried out of laughter! Har can't wait to read more!^_^ Kill Terra! .::Chuckles evilly in her corner::. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 07:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is interesting!! And Terra's a bitch!!!
Please keep up the good work and let the chapters commin'!!!!! |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hah i love the last chapter you just put up. Revenge is so sweet! |
Reviewed By: kim On: October 06, 2002 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really liking this. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Saiya-jin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is interesting, i like it. Keep up.
~``~Cherry~``~ |
Reviewed By: Angel of death 87 On: January 06, 2003 11:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Why does Bulma have to go out with this guy? Does her father want them to get married? Well, Bulma better tell her father soon about her and Vegeta. Anyway, nice chapter and please update soon! |
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