| "The Love of Two Women; The Heart of One Man" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dude i love Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove wanna see more. Vegeta is off the hook bulma is awsome and terra doesn't think straight
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Reviewed By: aquaprincess1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go girls~! Update! I can't wait for the next chapter.. Is Veggie following?
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 10:47 CST
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Is Vegeta the one who is following them? I don't think he should be that protective over her. |
Reviewed By: ~Krissy~ On: February 10, 2003 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is AWESOME! I love this story keep it up I'm an impatient woman that needs more of this story ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
~Krissy~ |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I came back to ask two more things, is Bulma sick because she's pregnant? And is her father going to refuse to let her see Vegeta again? |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover On: January 06, 2003 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Y'now I like Lemons, but I think that it was a little too early to put one in chapter six! Other than that, great story! And not all girls are bitches, only Terra is. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 On: December 29, 2002 04:06 CST
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Bulma isn't telling veggie everything! Why not? I mean, if her father wants her to go out with someone, it wouldn't harm to tell vegeta right? well, I think she will get in a lot of trouble if she keeps up all this lying. Anyway, nice chapter again and update soon!!! :) |
Reviewed By: MySizeRapunzelBarbie On: December 02, 2002 13:36 CST
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OMG! Well, your story is good but I really don't like Bulma. Actually Terra is a lot cooler than her. Vegeta is a dumbass because...ALL GIRLS ARE BITCHES! THAT'S JUST THE WAY WE ARE! Bulma is probably hiding a lot of shit from Vegeta...her father is probably molesting her or something. Aww! I hope not!! That would be sad. But that would make the story more interesting...K well g2g bye~MySizeRapunzelBarbie |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 10:18 CST
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does terra think she can make vegeta jeallous???
That's not gonna work anyway...and Bulma is in love!!! And vegeta to??? Anywayz....nice chapter again!!! write more soon!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: November 21, 2002 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I've never read this before! It is wonderful! Great job, girl! |
Reviewed By: Stefani On: November 21, 2002 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very good, has a good storyline, and all.
Two questions, though.
1: If King Vegeta wasn't Vegeta's father,then why is he STILL named Vegeta?
2: Is this story finished, or is there more to come?
I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2002 11:44 CST
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I knew that Vegeta would chose fot Bulma (duh), but what the hell is Terra up to? Well, nice story so far!!!! :D |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 23:51 CST
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Yay! He chose Bulma! TAKE THAT TERRA!! she's such a biyotch ... hehehe! I wonder what her revenge is going to be? ^.~ |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 14:33 CST
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ooh, Poor Veggie-chan! I'll console him ^_~ Heh, keep up the great work ^_^.
~Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 11:46 CST
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hehehe! That was a nice chapter!! I wanna know how Vegeta will react, although I know who he'll choose anyway.....hehehehe! Nice chapter and please continue!!! By the way...Terra sucks! But I think she's made for that pupose!! |
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