| "Results of a Backrub" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: The Kiobito Thenshi of Shinigami
Reviewed By: Thorn On: September 25, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you. Thank you. you know how hard it is to find Fics like this? So thankyou. hehehehehe. This is great.
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Reviewed By: Fujimiya Jai On: December 01, 2002 00:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry, but I'm on a critical streak. I like it. One problem:
With that I removed my finger. It was slick with his natural lubricant.
Correct me if I'm wrong...but Duo=male. Boys don't self-lubricate. |
