| "Entrapment" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 01:17 CDT
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This thing needs a prequel and just maybe a sequel. How would the others react? How did they get thier tails back? Where is that all important first lemon?
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Beautiful. very well done.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH Mind blowing smex! I loved this so so much. Of course who wouldn't love a kickass one-shot smex filled story?
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Title: oh my, convert me!
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: April 30, 2004 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read much yaoi so I thought I'd start with one shots. I waded through a lot of groaners before coming to this stunning piece. I am in awe. Beautifully done, sexy as hell, and the characterizations of v & g are...if I say MASTERFUL will you believe I'm trying really hard not to gush? wow, I think I'm converted! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: death bich On: February 26, 2004 18:15 CST
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WOW... me and the vioces in my mine have nothing more to say
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Reviewed By: Melpomene125 On: January 26, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vejiita says that he'll protect Kakarrot from everything including himself at the end. That line makes it seem as if he was in love with Kakarrot even before the Bonding... This is great!! P.S. Give us some more Absolution!! Please!! melpomene125@msn.com
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Title: Sugoi
Reviewed By: Blue Siren ( not logged in) On: January 05, 2004 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMCA74 is right this is trully a masterpiece!! ... I don't know what to say other than that. I mean the charisma you gave each, Kakarott and Vegeta is amazing. I am so sorry I haven't read any of your work before. I have to thank AM for bringing me to the light ;). I have a favor to ask of you. I am writing a Yaoi V/K "Ai no Kakarotto" is posted here on MM.I would be very flattered if you read it and gave me some pointers, after reading this fic I became forever your fan. I will look for all your work so be ready to her a lot from me ;) Blue Siren
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Reviewed By: Myself On: March 05, 2003 19:33 CST
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Its so incredibly kawaii at the end...I almost "awwed". I love how your stories fit so easily with the characters, to me they never seem OOC, and I love it. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you, I'm not the biggest yaio fans...but that is one of the hottest things I've ever read. I tip my hat to you! I love Vegeta in this fic...that's just the way he's supposed to be! |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 12:14 CST
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i like it! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 On: December 10, 2002 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This beautiful fic left me BREATHLESS! You conveyed Goku's emotions with such depth, that I felt them along with him! Even the movement of his tail showed the turmoil he was going through. The mental picture that you painted of him curled up in the corner, awaiting Vegeta's awakening was SO powerful, as were all of Vegeta's speech and actions. This was just a brilliant work of writing. Now I'm off with the hopes that you have more fics for me to read. :o) |
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 23:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat is what it was! A FREAKING MASTERPIECE!! My breathe was sucked out of me and I was like 2 inches from my monitor. I was totally ready to bounce on the bed and shout, WHATS NEXT!!!
That would not have been good though. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic gives me chills every time I read it. I adore the focus on the changing that occurs when the claim is made. It's a relief to know I'm not the only one who realizes that being seme means more than getting to be on top!!!
*shivers* I love this fic...one of my very favorites. |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 21:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. Are you sure it's the end?
Waiting........ |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Very well written. And very enjoyable. I really liked this. I did feel like the relationship was kinda one-sided. But I didn't know if that was the angle you were going for or not. Anyways, all in all, this was great!! It'd be cool if you wrote another chapter, but it's a nice ending if you don't. ^^ Keep up the good work! |
