"Exotic Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Madhadder On: September 11, 2005 23:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Loved it!!!!! You are quite the writer, and have written more stories than me LOL I love this pairing. Great job
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Reviewed By: a random review On: January 02, 2004 17:28 CST Comment/Review: I think Yamato and Mimi make a great couple.
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Reviewed By: princessmoony On: January 26, 2003 11:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this has to be one of the best mimato fics iv read in a long time! u shud write mor mimatos coz there rnt dat many! lol neways its one of the best and i hope deres moe to come! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Princess On: December 02, 2002 15:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it was very good! hope you will make a sequel but if you want to, to make it a lemon!! |
Reviewed By: Princess On: December 02, 2002 15:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it was very good! hope you will make a sequel but if you want to, to make it a lemon!! |
Reviewed By: Princess On: December 02, 2002 15:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it was very good! hope you will make a sequel but if you want to, to make it a lemon!! |
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 02:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Overall it was O.K. but it started too slow.
Next time you do a story like this I would suggest starting with the plane crashing or them crawling out of the wreckage. Spelling and grammer needs work but it was easy enough to follow. Kinda boring but like I said it started slow. "Keep trying, you'll keep getting better." |
Reviewed By: Mimi girl On: January 06, 2002 21:39 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: love it!!!!
to totally cool!!!!
haven't you considered writtin another mimato lemon fic??? |
Reviewed By: Werewolfgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 16:32 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Rating says all |