Reviewed By: LifeSenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, you put of this fic. I was waiting ^_^
I love how you described dying Vejita-sei. Very dramatic, as is the rest of the chapter. Also, I like the way you described Baby's...feelings? And the way King Vejita died was very...creative ^_^ Nice mental image there. But it fit in so well with the story...and I can very easily see Freiza doing that.
I's probably say more, but I can't think of anything else at the moment. -_-' Lastly, I would've read & reviewed this earlier, but...you didn't tell me that you'd uploaded it!
---Life, impatiently waiting for the next chapter. |
