| "The blue one" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: menacing-shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a pretty good story but the end didnt suprise me. It was still one of the best though.
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Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 06:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's been about time that I saw a YxK fic and I agree that this is a fine piece of work and I enjoy it keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: Mermaid Ninja On: May 24, 2004 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I could really see Yusuke fall down the hill! I can easily imagine what's happening! P.S., I support the Botan/Kurama coupling.
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Reviewed By: Pan Pingli [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 18:20 CDT
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This is the best YxKeiko fic I've ever read! ^_^ It's wonderful!
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Reviewed By: psycho On: August 01, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good i loved it. keep writing |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: May 20, 2003 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. Great Job!!! |
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader On: April 04, 2003 03:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story! It's not often that you find well writen fics of any fandom, but lucky for YYH it has been blessed with more then its fair share of talented writers and this story proves you are one of them. And while Yusuke and Keiko are not my favorite couple, (More of a Kazuma/Yukina chick myself) they are in the top three. Its good to see a story writen about them, especially one with a NC-17 rating. Seems like nowadays everyone is Kurama/Hiei-ing it so it was good to see an Het fic in the fandom. They are few and far between but if you keep writing like this, then Yaoi fic has some serious comp! Keep Writing!
Kenya |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word to describe this fic... "Perfect!" (With the exclamation point! LoL!) Darn, it made me honry... LoL... it was a great fic, you should write more Yuuske and Kieko fics!!! |
Reviewed By: pyro_gal4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, no more ghay fanfiction. LOL! I loved this ficcie! I personally write Yusuke and Keiko fanfics so if you wanna read mine, feel free! Great job, and it's like the only Y/k lemon i've eva read! Well, great work!
peace,
Kristy Rei, (Rei-chan) :) |
Reviewed By: pyro_gal4U [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, no more ghay fanfiction. LOL! I loved this ficcie! I personally write Yusuke and Keiko fanfics so if you wanna read mine, feel free! Terric job, and it's like the only Y/k lemon i've evar read! Well, great work!
peace,
Kristy Rei, (Rei-chan) :) |
Reviewed By: cooleo On: November 28, 2002 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and when i mean enjoyment, i mean "enjoyment!" |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: November 03, 2002 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It has no gay people! Keep up the great work! /\_/\ |
Reviewed By: The Real Unknown On: October 07, 2002 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This rules
1. it's wrote really well
2. it has Y+K and I wanted to read one of those
3. it's not a gay fic
there's too many of those out there
write more how 'bout a Kumabara+Botan? |
