| "Yours Completely" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: nice fic On: September 01, 2005 08:32 CDT
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Wow. i think that was one of the best fic i ever read. i loved it, espically the game. It so cute(but on like the 13th line i think you refered to Bakura as a tomb robber-but wo really cares about that) anywasy i loved it, it was so completly diffrent form the once i've ever read.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... This was really intersting. Itwa sgood though don't get me wrong, but still interesting...Well no wait, Original.Yes, Original that's it! I've never seen anyone write a fic where they all play a game like that! It was pretty cool and I like the little fantasy lemon thing too! I think you did quite welll..
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Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: June 24, 2003 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good!! I didn't know "submissive" Bakura could be so sexy! I really like the Game part!^-^ |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 On: April 20, 2003 17:44 CDT
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Wow, cool! Lol, I liked the game part, that was cool! The lemon wasn't that bad either, at least you can write one! I need to write one in this story I'm writing but every time I try I start blushing and simply can't write it. But I like reading them. Very interesting pairings. The very best part of the story was where Mai & Joey were asked when their first kiss was. The situation you gave is so believable!! How did you think of that? It's wicked cool. I can easily imagine that happening, it just fits them so well! Anyway, good job! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Sin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I think you have a gift with lemons! ((you and whoever else can't find any Yami/Bakura lemons...)) Shuttup Phiona. ^- I think that was excellent! GO YOU! |
Reviewed By: Yami Malik Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! you write here too. iI thought your style was familiar and then i looked at your name and put 2 and 2 together! It's the same story. On ff.net I am both Yami Sakura and Yami Lynz...My Yami Sakura got deleted for having a lemon :( anyways I love your story
Yami Malik Lover |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUGOI!!! that was really really really really really really good! the lemon wasnt the best, but the game part was so funny! its amusing to find out about everyone^^. pls do more of that!!! i need more laughs! this is going on my favs... i think ill check ur other fics. |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 17:09 CST
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The scene with all the couples (and the threesome) playing that game had some GREAT lines in it. Malik/Ryou/Marik are hysterical. |
