| "A Price to Pay (English)" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 02:58 CST
Comment/Review:
forgive me..but....are ya ever gona write a sequil to this?
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Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 09:52 CST
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Hee, a new chapter, finally!! Let me just say, I am waiting ever so impatiently to see Schu's grand plan in action. You evil tease. |
Reviewed By: Lilla On: January 19, 2003 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was just so good. Now at least Omi's coming on to Ayan realy makes sense was sort of expecting something of the kind... Now get to work 'cause i want more... OK I am evil and don't really have room to talk but hey I got a very good excuse sadly.
Sorry for not answering your mail but my PC caught a virus and wiped all infos out. Don't even have your address any longer... Anyhow what I would have told you had I had the possibility of communicating before is I really liked this chapter and hope work is being kind enough with you to let you write more!
Ja ne
Lilla |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 16:24 CDT
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This was just great. I loved the steamy scene between Aya and Omi. The little prophecy at the end was excellent BTW. Left us hanging you could say. Great job! Hurry soon with more. |
Reviewed By: Eeyore On: October 20, 2002 09:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
The rest of my review was cut off, gomen. (^^v) ze rest:
Your ficcy is so very sweet! (*___*) Indeed, I wonder what is Schu-bear's plan....? =(^.^)= |
Reviewed By: Eeyore On: October 20, 2002 09:47 CDT
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This is really getting more and more interesting and enjoyable! :D You'll write more soon, ne? yes? (^________^) It must be a picture of Aya-kun or something like that, ne?? I need to know the rest!! (> |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 10:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good. Keep going. You're doing an excellent job so far.
BTW: In case you didn't receive my email, your page on my site is up and running. |
Reviewed By: charis On: October 13, 2002 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree its a mirror. ohhhhh.
I want more, evil to stop it there.sigh
Normally I love Aya/Shu but this is so sweet. |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 13:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a MIRROR! I know it! Or some picture of Aya-kun. Weeee! I heart this story! Please continue it! |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY another author who writes a Schu/Aya story. *hugs*
And the Aya/Omi is also cool, although Schu/Aya is my absolute favourite pairing. ^-^
Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Taesaki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 08:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, i really like this so far. lots of angst, and angst is always good, ne? i want to know what happens with omi, most definitely. and schuldich, what is he up to anyhow? looking forward to the next chapter! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 10:39 CDT
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Woo hoo! I just love the angst. Great job Enna! I hope that you continue this soon. It's got me on the edge of my seat. Keep up the great work!
Oh, and the translating was great. Tell Sapphire ... thumbs up! ^_~ |
