| "The Nightmares of War" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
WooHoo! Blood! Don't mind me, I'm a gore freak. You've seen that in my PKMN fic.
I loved that start. We had blood within the first few lines. Continue with this and the others ok. Please. |
Reviewed By: Kitty Kat On: December 01, 2002 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, I like that. Please do continue, I would love to see somemore. Oh, one question, is the romance part between Ash and Gary? Just wondering, since I hardly see those kind of fics, and deathly love Gary x Ash things. If it is, then CONTINUE! If not..then..er.. continue anyway because I would love to see more of Ash the killer. You make him seem so evil..it kicks ass. |
Reviewed By: The Rater On: November 16, 2002 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was certainly diffrent, but also too boring. More exiciting. Remember, out of all the people I've ever rated, only one person got 10 for an overall rating. You have heard from The Rater.... |
Reviewed By: Silver2039 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its good but you should add more deatail and make the chapter longer. |
