Reviewed By: Shi-tenshi On: April 10, 2005 04:19 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: That was really good but you accidentally switched the chapters. I mean it was good but chapter 2 is in chapter 1s spot you really need to fix that. but anyways great story.bye.
Reviewed By:PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2002 18:41 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: THIS WAS REALY FUNNY & CUTE GOOD JOB