| "Lina and Gourry: Love Conspiracies" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Betsy C. On: August 01, 2004 22:06 CDT
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There are no real words to say hoe wxceptional this story is. The way you write Lina and Gourry makes me love the series even more. I'm eagerly awaiting (no pressure) any updates you may throw my way. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Noseless Wonder On: July 23, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Has to be the best L/G fic I've read in a looooooong time! I see you haven't updated since Feb, but I sincerely hope you haven't given up on it! I loved your depiction of Gourry's family... warm and large... similar to a small community rather than just a family. It's probably the closest depiction to being canon I've read. Awesome writing style. Congratulations on pulling off the addition of ten or more original characters as well as you did. It's not an easy task, and most authors get lost in a sea of new characters and tend to make them generic and basically carbon copies of themselves. I loved how each new character had their own distinctive differences. They each behaved similar enough for you to know they were family, yet different enough to be different people. In effect, not only did you avoid the reader's suspicions of a self-insertion fic, but you made you characters loveable and memorable in a genre where only pre-existent characters with pre-existent plots get attention. (Fanfiction) Awesome job! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Utena the Black Rose On: June 22, 2004 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to finish this!!! It's so good! And I can't wait for Zel and Amelia's story either! Please update soon!!!!
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Title: Need more chapters!
Reviewed By: Pammy On: March 22, 2004 19:59 CST
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Lina and Gourry: Love Conspiracies is a the best freaking story out there. Please don't have given up on this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: March 21, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I was casually strolling through I realized you UPDATED! It was off the hook. Awesome, clever story. I'm seriously dying for that next chapter because I'm sure it's you-know-who. Cough*Naga*cough More please!
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Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: March 21, 2004 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I was casually strolling through I realized you UPDATED! It was off the hook. Awesome, clever story. I'm seriously dying for that nect chapter because I'm sure it's you-know-who. Cough*Naga*cough More please!
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Reviewed By: arihat On: March 17, 2004 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! A masterpiece in the making and one of my all time favorite stories. I love how Lina's past keeps coming back to bite her on the ass. Please update really soon. Bye! ^_^
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Reviewed By: CT On: February 29, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. It's about time Lina confesed her felling for Gourry. I also liked the way the chapter ended. I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what Lina's reaction will be. Hope to see the next chapter out soon.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: sleepyshippakakotamagic On: February 20, 2004 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh sweet merciful Lord.... how could you do something as cruel as bringing NAHGA into the Gabriev family???? Are you as nuts as all those relatives? LOL Hilarious story, but all the relatives and the familiar people they're married to/familiar with just gets way too confusing! Good story though
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Title: Best story ever written!!!!
Reviewed By: kielala On: January 12, 2004 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I applaud this masterpiece in writing. Never read a more in character Slayers fanfic. Makes me sorely miss the series...sniff, sniff. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Yami Jacki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story! update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Leora_Gabriev On: November 23, 2003 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be the most incredible fanfiction that I've ever read!!! Please do write some more!! I would like to know what happenes to Lina and Gourry and the family!!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Da Wraith On: September 15, 2003 21:31 CDT
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Excelent story. You Are the best fanfic writer I've seen. Keep up the great work! |
Title: 4th review
Reviewed By: Ghanda On: September 02, 2003 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unbelievably wonderful! That's all I gotta sat about that! =D |
Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: September 02, 2003 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! There is no Slayers story out there that can even compare to this. ^^ |
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