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 Reviewed By: Eleclya [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 27, 2002 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great. Please please please I beg of you please continue. I've gotta know what happens next.

Keep writin away, and fast
 Reviewed By: selena281 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2002 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought I put a comment on here before....
Ah well, anyway I love this fanfic (well, not furiiza of course). but you have a great storyline, a wonderful writing style, and vejita and kakorotto seem so right together!!

Is chapter 11 the end, or do you plan to continue...???
 Reviewed By: Sam  On: April 17, 2002 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved your story and would love to hear when you've added another chappie. Please e-mail me at angelgoddess105@hotmail.com. I would love to hear from you.

^-^ sam
 Reviewed By: Kandy  On: March 22, 2002 08:57 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
wiping tears from my eyes. Literally. This was so sad. The have to get back at Frieza they just have to. I can't take it anymore, you got write more chapters. At least one, Please?!
 Reviewed By: BejiitasLover [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2002 15:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That's the only bad thing about just posting it chapter by chapter... IT DRIVES PEOPLE INSANE! But this is a great fic =D VEEERRRYYY original (no sarcasm here btw)! I can't wait to see what happens. You kill off my Veggie-chan and I'll have to send an angry mob after you. >_>; Kill off Kakarotto and my buddy will personally beat you with a squeaky mallet (HI AMY!).
 Reviewed By: Rockstar Freeza  On: January 29, 2002 01:29 CST
Comment/Review:
That poor baby....
 Reviewed By: arkangel221  On: January 17, 2002 17:51 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i've read this before but come on it been like six months since your last update, lets get on the stick man! get on with it!
 Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 28, 2002 23:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
GooooooooOOOODAMNIT HOW DARE YOU STOP THERE!!! I AM YOUR FAN HOW DARE YOU DEFY ME?! Uh...*ahem*...sorry about that outburst...but I wanna know if everything *IS* gonna be okay. Even though I must say...I hate seeing Kakarotto so weak. He SO has to pull through. I shall hunt you down and stalk you if he doesn't! Uh...joking. But yeah. I'll be EXTREMELY pissed off if Kaka doesn't get back on top like he belongs.

And uh...love the way you've set it in this AU...it's sweet!

You have the power to make me cry...no wait, cry isn't the right word for using an entire box of tissues, is it? o.o;;






No, I think that's more like bawl o______o;;









Write write write write write!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: sunrissa [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2001 08:03 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was gr8! Plz continue it! Don't leave me hanging!
 Reviewed By: Zab Jade  On: September 05, 2001 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:

I'm really liking this so far. You must write more soon, or I will have to hum at you.
 Reviewed By: Vindali  On: September 05, 2001 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:

You're right I want to kill you! *takes deep breathe* *to self* ok you can't kill her cause then she couldn't finish this. *another deep breathe* damn. Please write more! I beg of u!
 Reviewed By: Vindali  On: September 05, 2001 19:58 CDT
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Dun dun dun...what will Frezia do when he see's the mark!?!?!?! Yea for you for post again today! *kisses you feet* thank you thank you thank you.
 Reviewed By: sley  On: September 06, 2001 02:53 CDT
Comment/Review:

wow...please write more,yes???Let the damn frieza pay..!!
 Reviewed By: Vindali  On: September 06, 2001 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:

*wipes tears away* Only your stories! Only your stories have the abilty to make me cry. Y!? *sniffle* That bastard Frezia! Well, at least KAkarotto just went SSJ right? *hopeful look* Then he can kick Frezia's ass and find someway to bring back his people! *sniffle* Y can't u write happy stories?! Course then I probably wouldn't read em. *pouts* oh well. Well, come on write more!
 Reviewed By: Seeking Serenity  On: September 06, 2001 17:40 CDT
Comment/Review:

Go Mara! Vejita and Kakarotto are together! Yay! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew! Furiiza had the nerve to touch him again! Make Kakarotto kick his arse! And then let Vejita torture him! Add soon!
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