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Reviewed By: MiraiSonGokou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2002 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GooooooooOOOODAMNIT HOW DARE YOU STOP THERE!!! I AM YOUR FAN HOW DARE YOU DEFY ME?! Uh...*ahem*...sorry about that outburst...but I wanna know if everything *IS* gonna be okay. Even though I must say...I hate seeing Kakarotto so weak. He SO has to pull through. I shall hunt you down and stalk you if he doesn't! Uh...joking. But yeah. I'll be EXTREMELY pissed off if Kaka doesn't get back on top like he belongs.
And uh...love the way you've set it in this AU...it's sweet!
You have the power to make me cry...no wait, cry isn't the right word for using an entire box of tissues, is it? o.o;;
No, I think that's more like bawl o______o;;
Write write write write write!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sunrissa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 08:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was gr8! Plz continue it! Don't leave me hanging! |
Reviewed By: Zab Jade On: September 05, 2001 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm really liking this so far. You must write more soon, or I will have to hum at you. |
Reviewed By: Vindali On: September 05, 2001 18:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're right I want to kill you! *takes deep breathe* *to self* ok you can't kill her cause then she couldn't finish this. *another deep breathe* damn. Please write more! I beg of u! |
Reviewed By: Vindali On: September 05, 2001 19:58 CDT
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Dun dun dun...what will Frezia do when he see's the mark!?!?!?! Yea for you for post again today! *kisses you feet* thank you thank you thank you. |
Reviewed By: sley On: September 06, 2001 02:53 CDT
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wow...please write more,yes???Let the damn frieza pay..!! |
Reviewed By: Vindali On: September 06, 2001 13:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
*wipes tears away* Only your stories! Only your stories have the abilty to make me cry. Y!? *sniffle* That bastard Frezia! Well, at least KAkarotto just went SSJ right? *hopeful look* Then he can kick Frezia's ass and find someway to bring back his people! *sniffle* Y can't u write happy stories?! Course then I probably wouldn't read em. *pouts* oh well. Well, come on write more! |
Reviewed By: Seeking Serenity On: September 06, 2001 17:40 CDT
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Go Mara! Vejita and Kakarotto are together! Yay! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew! Furiiza had the nerve to touch him again! Make Kakarotto kick his arse! And then let Vejita torture him! Add soon! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: September 07, 2001 20:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
aw, ya reaaaaally gotta do the next chapter, and make them BEAT THE C*** OUT OF THAT *** KUSOYAROU! You know, Frieza- I gotta say, the cute bits are cute, and the Frieza bits are- I WANNA TEAR HIS HEAD OFF! basicly, very good work! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Pixie On: September 16, 2001 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome, I hope you write more soon. |
Reviewed By: SonGokusGirl On: September 30, 2001 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love yuor writting. It is so original and I hope you right more fics and add more onto "Tattered" |
Reviewed By: Banance On: October 11, 2001 15:08 CDT
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You're going to write more to this soon, right? I mean that's not the end...I mean... I love this fic! |
Reviewed By: LindaN On: October 13, 2001 12:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story! I just love it. It feels right to have Vegeta with Kakarotto if he's not with Bulma, and I have always thought so. Your story is dramatic and touching and I am happy you wrote it for us. Thank you. Linda |
Reviewed By: LindaN On: October 14, 2001 09:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed your story from the first time I laid eyes on it, and I have just now reread it and know that you too have been a victim of the cruel voter, and I have voted on your story from my heart and am under the impression that this story is written well enough to stand with a much higher rating, and voted accordingly and will do so on a regular basis. Thank you for sharing your heart and you talent with us. Linda |
Reviewed By: pokemoon1 On: October 27, 2001 11:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
more! more! more! i LOVE this story! i never thought that i would see a V/G fic. yeah its great! |
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