| "Roger & Dorothy's future prospects?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Oh.. I get it...
Reviewed By: FuyuKuri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it wasn't for the italicized tag to "cue jazz porno music", I probably wouldn't have understood how this could possibly have any sexual undertones. But thankfully, after reading and re-reading this little snippet a good 5 or six times, and imagining everything exactly where I believe you intended them to be, I came to the conclusion that it could be a fairly interesting opener for a steamy romantic interlude. Granted more detail and thought would have had to be placed into the story itself to make up for the confusion of the first chapter, but it's all still in there... somewhere. ^_^;
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Title: Roger & Dorothy's future prospects?
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 12:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: hmmmm...
Reviewed By: yumemaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay, yeah this is a story that leaves almost too much to the imagination. Are you saying that He is scared of her or something?
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Reviewed By: Hell God of Fury On: July 27, 2003 20:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
man i cant wait until the next chapter good cliffhanger |
Reviewed By: Pan Pingli On: July 19, 2003 23:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
That sounded quite painful...
It's nice to see someone put a lighter spin on the pairing- that was cute. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Death Beyond the Grave [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
i don't get it |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 10:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Errr... um... huh???? |
