| "I'm Like A Bird" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Blink On: January 08, 2003 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel the distinct urge to claw out your eyes. Nothing personal. Most of the time I hate sap fics, but this one comes across not as melodramatic, but sincere. You've done an excellent job of not only expressing what the charactors feel, but of making the reader care about what the charactor feels. Nice acomplishment. Still feel like clawing though. |
Reviewed By: WishyWashy On: December 26, 2002 12:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was absoutely fantastic. You did everything right. It was really great. Next you can write about how Yugi feels about the situation. Keep writing.
Sincerely'
CocoSpin |
Reviewed By: GOODwriter123456 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2002 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
-_-.......................... um it is great....
SETO KAIBA IS SO FREAKIN HOT! |
Reviewed By: Taito_kisses On: September 30, 2002 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps and wipes a tear* That was wonderful! I loved it! Poor Seto! *bawls* That was a wonderful story! Keep it up! |
