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| "Prisoner of War" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: articuno13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:26 CDT
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hey! did ya forget this account again? a update would be nice, 'cause this is really good
| Reviewed By: Kat On: June 19, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how you have made this chapter, it is good and gives a new twist to the plot. I love it and I cant wait for the next one. | Reviewed By: Kat On: June 12, 2003 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I started to read this story yesterday before i left for work. I came back, and then started to read on, it was 3:30 this morning before I could go to sleep because this was so good. I couldn't put it down untill I read ever word until you had stopped. You need to add more to this, because it is a really really good story. Usually I don't like how people change around the characters past or something. But when you did it, I over looked it, cause the story you made is better then the one that is there. MORE!!! | Reviewed By: Hatter, The Mad On: January 20, 2003 18:08 CST
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Wahaha, yes, an update. This...pleases me. I'll have to check out that chappy on FFnet. Aw, minute traces of Heero/Duo fluff. I like. I also enjoy the idea of everyone conspiring to set them up. ^_^ Sally makes an interesting mix into the plan. Good on you! Can't wait for the next, and good luck on your finals. | Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 06:05 CST
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First things first, it is always utterly wunderfool to check up on your story & discover that there's a new chapter I've not read yet. Secondly, it honestly took me a second read through before I figured out WTF was going on when the pilots were talking about what they were doing that weekend. Wufei's a brilliant actor if he could say that & make it believable since all us fangirls know it's in complete opposition to his normal personality.
Now, back to a real review. *grins* I like this Sally chick! Unfortunately I've seen v. v. v. few episodes of Gundam Wing & none featuring Ms Sally Po with whom so many people set up Wufei, so if your characterisation of her is anything approaching her real self on the show I've already decided she's cool. Not quite on Lucrezia Noin's level, but possibly on a par with Meiran Chang. *thinks* Have you ever noticed that virtually all the girls on GW are great except for Relena Peacecraft? She seems to be the only character on the show who regularly annoys the s**t through everyone who watches. I think that might be saying something.
Oh yeah, I've gotta go through the usual stuff about how excellent your characterisation of the pilots is, how intruiging the plot is (an ongoing saga, who knows where they'll go next? Sounds cheesy but it's truer than you may think), how excellent the romantic setup is, & how well you get inside people's heads. I've run out of new & interesting ways to say 'YOU RULE' so you'll just have to be content with the block capital statement I just used. Feel special.
^__________^
Cheers,
--Shella-chan | Reviewed By: Hatter, The Mad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 20:42 CST
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I like this story alot. I know that's a plain thing to say, but that's just the way it is. *rolls in the goodness that is this story* You're talented. Heero and Duo will get past whatever the hell this is, hopefully. I want them to make with the ...making out. Anyway. Good job. Can't wait for the next part, if there is one. | Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It makes me soooooooo happy when there's an update on this fic ... & this chapter was possibly the deepest, most thought-provoking bit of writing I've yet seen on this site. Hn. Methinks all reviewers on mm.org need to be bitch-slapped for ignoring the wickidness of this fic. Grr etc. Stoopid people.
Can't get over how cool this chapter was. I happen to love unusual POVs, as well as reflections/introspective, as well as stuff wot is deep 'n' meaningful. Plus the v. nice descriptions of the pilots -- you're v. good at that didja know? Wickid stuff.
Plus the bit where Duo chucked a Leo in front of Heero to save him was sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet...
Cheers,
--Shella-chan | Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so I sat down and read the whole thing in one go. . . not too shabby! But I didn't bother to pay attention to when you do updates. . . . this is a bad thing isn't it? Oh well. Looking forward to the next chapter | Reviewed By: Aasae [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 16:01 CST
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Hey, I really like this story, I read it avidly everytime a new chapter comes out, can't wait to find out what happens next. And not only is your idea, great, your writing style rocks too:) Keep up the good work! | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: December 04, 2002 14:28 CST
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Heh heh, took me long enough to read it, eh? Sorry 'bout that. Ack, poor Heero! What a way to find out! Still, I suppose it's better than Duo telling him in the heat of battle. ^_~
You sound like you had a really rough day on Thursday. I'm sorry. You shoulda hit the little monsters right back! heh heh... but I guess you couldn't do that.
Anyhow, I really did like the chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next. Especially when the battle's over and Heero and Duo are face to face! Can we say: fireworks?!!!
Talk to ya later! | Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 01:22 CST
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Yeahhhhhh! Shinigami's back! *HUGE evil grin* Ahhh, the look on Heero's face. ^___^ 'It'll do' indeed.
Ai, can't get over how extremely cool this fic is. I loved the kiss a couple of chapters ago, gotta say! Was bloody brilliant! Also Wufei's reaction was funny as always. You write all five of them so well! & so descriptively, too! Good stuff, here's to more! *toasts*
Cheers,
--Shella-chan | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: November 25, 2002 15:23 CST
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*sacastically* Now, don't I feel real intelligent?
Geez, of course it was Wufei. Obviously. How the heck did I miss that?!
Anyhow, loved the chappie! Especially the end! ^_~ The only part I don't get in this is the flashback thing. Heero's flashback was of J blowing up the space port, right? And he thought that Duo died. So, how is Duo thinking that Heero died? Did he think the Shuttle exploded, or what? I'm a little confused.
He he, I can't wait for Duo to tell Heero that he's a gundam pilot! I only wonder why Heero hasn't figured it out yet? He's a bright boy. Also, why he let 'Fei off the hook. I'd think Heero would get it that Wufei and Duo knew eachother.
I'm sorry, I don't mean to question your fic, or the way you write it. Please don't think that I'm doing that. I was just talking, that's all. :-P
Ah!!! A big two-engined plane just flew right over my house! Could he get any lower?!
Anyhow, I've rambled enough. Have another out soon, ok??? Please???? | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: November 11, 2002 13:58 CST
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YAY!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!
I really liked this chapter. I like how Heero is so caring towarrds Duo. I'm glad you updated so soon! I was afraid I wouldn't be seeing a new chapter for awhile.
Well, that's all I guess. I'm really sick right now (again... geez) so I'm gonna go take some NyQuil, or something, and go into a nice drugged sleep. Bye. | Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 22:13 CST
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MWAhahahahaha!!! Great story. Its going on my favorites list. CAnt really think of anything else to say... hope you write more soon... cant wait... the usual. ^-^ | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: November 06, 2002 13:53 CST
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Absolutely loved the new chapter!!!! I understand that updates won't be as frequent, but please try to update this as much as you can. I wanna know what happens next!
You're right, I do want to know about that JOB-O (did I get that right?) test you took. Weird answers?
Congrats to your mom! This is gonna seem like a stupid question, but how do you like your new step-dad?
I know I promised to make this long, but I really have to go. Sorry! Again, please update as soon as you possibly can! | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
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