| "The Waiting Place" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: blahblah2031 On: July 27, 2004 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a lovely, glorious, smuttilicious author and you need to stop whatever you're doing and start writing more (smut). o_o; I actually followed your link from ff.net to see more of your stuff o_o Write more! Especially Gateau/Milphey/Marron angst. Anggggsstttt.
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Reviewed By: lntora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's see. Marron. Gateau. Yaoi/Shounen-ai. Angst. Possibility for a happy ending. Definite keeper for my favourites folder. I know it's been over a year, but perhaps you'll find a muse and continue this fic one day. I look forward to reading it if/when that happens.
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Reviewed By: Ai-chan On: September 22, 2003 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story... wow. I like this. It proves my theory, which no one I know believes, that Gateau really loves Marron. It grabs at your heart and makes you wonder if you'd be able to do the same thing.
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Reviewed By: Nozomi On: February 21, 2003 08:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I definitely think you should continue. I like it, I definitely like it... a lot. ^_^ pretty pretty please write more! |
Reviewed By: Lin-san On: November 16, 2002 17:21 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic is certainly interesting, and concidering that you don't say who is talking, at least you didn't freak out your classmates too much. Good grammar, well written. I like it....well, I'd like it more if it wasn't yaoi, but still ^____^ |
