"Indecent Behavior" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: sailorunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 19:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: pretty please add more. i have to know if bunny will be saved!
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Reviewed By: Michiko17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2008 15:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please finish this story!! It's very interesting and I want to find out what happens next. Thanks
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Reviewed By: sousie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 05:25 CDT Comment/Review: can't wait to read the rest
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Title: Indecent Behavior Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 18:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Indecent Behavior Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 11:44 CST Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: someone On: March 10, 2003 18:10 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Amaris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 22:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: it's a wonderful basis, however you need to flesh it out, and don't worry it's not that dark of a fic. |
Reviewed By: Bunni On: July 07, 2002 03:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your story was really good I cant wait untill you update your story. |
Reviewed By: ohmygodimblonde [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 21:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You have a very good talent. You really need to finish the 4th chapter though. Alot of people want you to.I will definatly come back and read the rest. The dad really needs to get the **** beat out of him!I definatly want to know what happens next!I also like the french that you put in there. It really spices up the story! |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 10, 2002 00:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HEy i really love this story so far and i would love to read more all u have to do is up date. JA Eo |
Reviewed By: Amande-chan On: April 07, 2002 17:09 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Very disturbing but very cool--now I can tell my bud how to say blow job in french! Mwahahaha! |
Reviewed By: Kero On: March 11, 2002 16:47 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What happens next? I normaly only read
Cardcaptor fanfiction but this is a great fanfic. So please contine. |
Reviewed By: Renee (a.k.a small lady) On: February 13, 2002 10:37 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Dear Sere-chan,
Please continue this wonderful fanfic.
I want to know what happens next. So continue
A.S.A.P.
It's so Kawaii! |
Reviewed By: ~* Small Lady*~ On: February 04, 2002 16:23 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Please continue..... What happens next??!!??!! |
Reviewed By: Mehoshi On: February 03, 2002 13:06 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please continue!!!!!!! I must find out what
happens next. Sooooo please will you contine?
This is a realy good fanfic. |
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