| "Indecent Behavior" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amaris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a wonderful basis, however you need to flesh it out, and don't worry it's not that dark of a fic. |
Reviewed By: Bunni On: July 07, 2002 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was really good I cant wait untill you update your story. |
Reviewed By: ohmygodimblonde [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very good talent. You really need to finish the 4th chapter though. Alot of people want you to.I will definatly come back and read the rest. The dad really needs to get the **** beat out of him!I definatly want to know what happens next!I also like the french that you put in there. It really spices up the story! |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 10, 2002 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEy i really love this story so far and i would love to read more all u have to do is up date. JA Eo |
Reviewed By: Amande-chan On: April 07, 2002 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very disturbing but very cool--now I can tell my bud how to say blow job in french! Mwahahaha! |
Reviewed By: Kero On: March 11, 2002 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happens next? I normaly only read
Cardcaptor fanfiction but this is a great fanfic. So please contine. |
Reviewed By: Renee (a.k.a small lady) On: February 13, 2002 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Sere-chan,
Please continue this wonderful fanfic.
I want to know what happens next. So continue
A.S.A.P.
It's so Kawaii! |
Reviewed By: ~* Small Lady*~ On: February 04, 2002 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Me want more!! Me want more!! Me want more!!
Please continue..... What happens next??!!??!! |
Reviewed By: Mehoshi On: February 03, 2002 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!!!!! I must find out what
happens next. Sooooo please will you contine?
This is a realy good fanfic. |
Reviewed By: Kero-chan On: January 30, 2002 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^ ^ Continue this cool fanfic!! Me want
* * More can you sil vou plais=please,
______ continue this wonderful fanfic?
See I know a little french to. I took some lessons in freshmen and sophmore year of high school. |
Reviewed By: Hermione-chan On: January 29, 2002 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is soooooo cool!!! you havve got
to continue it. I will come back and read it.
So you don't have to wrry. Besides other people
want you to continue this wonderful fanfic as
well. Soooo please continue it. |
Reviewed By: ~*MoonBeam*~ On: January 29, 2002 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a great fanfic!! I like that you put some french words in there. I don't mind it at all since I took some french lessons and I understand it and all. Stick with the same names.
This fanfic is cool!!!!!
I hope that You will continue it. (simles) |
Reviewed By: Pokepilot [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2001 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like it. I look forward to the next chapter to come. And Darien's dad ought to get his ass kicked....hm...well that's just my opinion but its still good...now if only I knew how to read French.... |
Reviewed By: Sailor Pixie On: September 16, 2001 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story I am waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. One thing though, if you copuld make Monsieur Kelly not Mamoru-baka that would be so cool. But other than that it is an awesome fic. |
Reviewed By: Duece of Spades On: November 01, 2001 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
It's...okay. Not the best, but certainly not the worst. There's no conclusion to your chapters, it just ends, which isn't really a good thing. The language aspect can add a certain ambience feel to the story, but only when it's done right. Try limiting the amount of french in the fic to only when it's needed. It can be irratating to constantly have to scroll up and down to read the translation.
Other than that, you're doing a fine job, and I hope you continue. |
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