| "Teasing the Lion" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: May 05, 2005 23:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
poor irvy!!! i love the story though! and my goo losh squall just admit it your confused!
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Reviewed By: Sillie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwehehe...poor Squall.. *grins* You really have to update this!! It's so good!!!
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Reviewed By: Nayna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 12:06 CST
Comment/Review:
come on ...please FINISH!!!! irvine wants you to finish! |
Reviewed By: Lorna(Am I coming across as insane stalker gal) On: November 15, 2002 19:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah, it would be hard not having english as a first language, but your spelling was alright to me, I've seen worse. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Sumeragi Sakura On: November 04, 2002 06:20 CST
Comment/Review:
To Lorna:
You're apologizing for your spelling in your review? 0__o;... Err, have you read my fic? I bet you can find more mistakes in there. My (lame) excuse for them is that English isn't my fist language. Sorry.. *sweatdrops*
So, you see, no need to apologize. And for everyone, thank you all for reading and reviewing. I'll be very swamped throughout November, so the next installment will be, much to my regret, sometime December. Again, sorry... |
Reviewed By: Lorna AGAIN On: November 01, 2002 14:20 CST
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You know I just suddenely realised what a bad spelling day I was going through, it makes me seem like one of those sad people named Kimmy who can't spell (apologies to any Kimmies who can spell) Anyway...I wanted to apologise for the bad spelling, because I was very tired ^^ |
Reviewed By: JadeFlamez On: October 31, 2002 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD This is sooooo good! I absolutely love it!! Heheh, I'm a yaoi freak, I know, but this is a really cute pairing and I love the story flow of it so far. Onegai, continue soon? |
Reviewed By: Lorna On: October 26, 2002 00:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hurry, right the next chapet ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lorna webster On: October 26, 2002 00:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
You can email me at stardust0186@hotmail.com or trowaandquatre@hotmail.com if you have any qualms about my comment. Now, I'm generally an irvine and Seifer fan, but NO ONE ever rights that, so Irvine and Squall is the next best thing. I loved it, Irvine is so sexy and you captured the breathtakingly hot quality of Squall perfectly. Good work, fanfiction.net don't know what they're missing. |
Reviewed By: Pickle in a jar! On: October 18, 2002 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Baby, you're wonderful! I love your writing and I would take it as a personal offence if you ever stopped. You're just simply amazing with this fic and I absolutly can't wait for the next chapter. I love you!
Sending lots 'o' love, huggles and cookies!
Pickle in a jar!
PS. I love the way you manage to keep Irvine in his flirty charicter! Go you! |
Reviewed By: StillSeekingWisdom On: October 18, 2002 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm in agreement with you: Irvine teasing Squall is a lot of fun. The hunt is on. Tough prey though. ^_^
That Irvine of yours is quite a character. Lots of fun lines like:
"He did enjoy it.
Otherwise, he would've hit me from the very beginning."
P.S. Yes, Squall is "just gorgeous". |
Reviewed By: CasualOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woohoo! I'll get to see this fic after all, I was a little scared when FFnet made that horrid announcement. *sniffs* I didn't even get to leave a review.
I know, I'm naughty, not giving feedback the first time I read it, but I'm here now. And I eagerly await more. |
Reviewed By: Marina Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 09:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh.. you didn't finish! it was funny!! Squall was all blushy blushy!! Me wants you to finish!! Yes?!? Pretties please finish???????? |
