| "Folken Teaches the First Grade" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!! This was great!!! PLEASE get the lunch chapter up SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Ravenshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 17:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL, Scarbie. I knew this would be too cute -- although I think the kids are being a little too nice to the substitute. Isn't some unwritten law that you have to be obnoxious to the sub? Maybe the kids are too young? I'll be looking for more. (BTW, nice to see you here!) |
Reviewed By: Equinox [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. I never pictured Folken as a first grade teacher. I really like your story and am interested in what will happen next!! Please continue soon. |
