| "But Une, I Want A Baby!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Sonia On: December 26, 2002 02:02 CST
Comment/Review:
The next part should be maybe that either Une finds out that she's already pregnant.
Or, she finds a nicer guy and hads an affair and got pregnant by mistake and treize has no idea that he's not the father.
Or, she might come close to get killed, but treize comes to rescue her then he proposes. |
Reviewed By: Sonia On: December 26, 2002 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Une should leave treize, treize is kind of a selfish jerk. She's better off without him. Obviously he doesn't love Une as much as she loves her, if he did, they would be married already. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 18:44 CDT
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Oh please say he's happy about the baby because i don't think i could take it if he wasn't. Une puts up with so much from him and i couldn't stand it if he acted like a jerk the whole time he was trying to get her pregnat to not want the baby when he finally got it. Please give this story a happy ending? Update soon! I'll be waiting! Happy writing! ^_~ |
