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| "Not Who They Seem To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pity it's all in italics, it makes it all seem like a dream sequence, that's why i put 9 on the overall rating. still, this is a great fic, and i'm glad to see so many people enjoying it, you deserve it girl! | Reviewed By: Yami_Girl_to_you On: October 11, 2002 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! Great story! I love the whole torture thing...coolio. BTW: Just have Ryou call Bakura "Bakura"? Thats his name, ne? | Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Yami's not COMPLETELY evil. That I wasn't expecting, but it certainly adds an intriguing twist to your story. Great work on this chapter | Reviewed By: Happy Lil Slasher [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 09:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh ,it's silly for me to be reviewing, but if any of my faithful reviewers read this then everything is good, ne? Any ways, thanks for all of your wonderful reviews^^ I just need to say that in response to some of the questions...well the one question I've been asked, I will be updating this fic here and on FF.Net. but, as many of you know, fanfiction.net has banned NC-17 fics, so if there are any lemon parts coming up then they will be posted here and an edited version will be posted on ffn. Thank you for all your reviews and I'll try to get more out soon^^
~Happy 'Lil Slasher~ | Reviewed By: Happy Lil Slasher [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 09:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh ,it's silly for me to be reviewing, but if any of my faithful reviewers read this then everything is good, ne? Any ways, thanks for all of your wonderful reviews^^ I just need to say that in response to some of the questions...well the one question I've been asked, I will be updating this fic here and on FF.Net. but, as many of you know, fanfiction.net has banned NC-17 fics, so if there are any lemon parts coming up then they will be posted here and an edited version will be posted on ffn. Thank you for all your reviews and I'll try to get more out soon^^
~Happy 'Lil Slasher~ | Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG!! You've updated!!! Yahoo this is so great, life is great! Yay! I feel like dancing! And you got some YugixJoey 'action'!!! Yaaaaaaaaaay this is so cool!! I loved this chapter, and if you don't continue soon, I'll kick your ass through IM. Don't underestimate me, cause I probably could... ^^^;;; Anyways, I love this, it makes my life a lot better! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!
Btw, I'm sorry about your disc, I got homr after the post office closed, so now I have to wait till Wednesday when I'll have enough time to go post it. I'm really sorry, hope you're not too angry! I was so freaked out this morning!
To quit this, I loooooooove your fic, and I've posted mine here too. And I also gave up whining about the italics, cause you just won't change em, so there must be a reason. The end was sooooooooooooooo kawaii!! Poor Yami! Poor all of them! I'm gonna write you a lemon, don't know why, I'm just inspired, and no preggyness, I promise. Tell me what pairing you'd like, and I'll type you one. Oh God, this is so cool!
Don't mind me, but I just love your fic, and I swear if I ever catch you giving up on it, I'll send my army of preggy guys and pikachus. Oh am I not evil tonight! Pity you're not online, but oh well... See ya! | Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel On: October 07, 2002 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This DEFINITELY a different story from most that I've read. Not many people delve into the darkest side of the pharoah. Your delivery is impeccable and I like the first person point of view from Ryou. Awesome work! | Reviewed By: Twilight Dreams On: October 06, 2002 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, gosh! This was awesome!
More more more! I kind of like you 'evil' view on Yami. Mwuwahahahaaaa!
Although the Ryou and Yuugi torture is a bit...scary...you did a great job in every aspect of this story.
WAI! Please write more, like now! ^_^
beanbond007@yahoo.com | Reviewed By: noname On: October 12, 2002 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love dit! I started reading it on fanfiction.net and then since there's something wrong with it now, I reaked my brain trying to figure out what would would happen next! Then I remembered mediaminor.org! what a miricle! | Reviewed By: ryoubakurafan013 (on ff.net) On: October 05, 2002 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this on FF.net. It's really good. Are you gonna write some more on this one? Oh, and I like your nickname thing. Anyway, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! And I love Bakura and Ryou pairings, too! They're so kawaii together!:) | Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooooh, please keep going! Go go go! *has fallen in love with your story* | Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!!! I love it!!! I am in love with Yami..but him being an evil bish..oh yea..::drool:: PLEASE CONTINUE!!! That rocks. ::has Yami tied on her wall..rapes him when she feels like it:: Mwuahahaha. | Reviewed By: Neo-QueenRini On: November 14, 2002 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. I tried to finish this on ff.net but it wouldn't let me in. Very original. | Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome two chapters there! You have a great talent
for writing. One thing though: I think it might be
Netscape's fault, I'm not a home reading this.
All the quotations marks got turned into question
marks. I could understand it, but it was a tad confusing.
Overall, great work! | Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 22:23 CDT
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Yami-kun ... Grrr ... He's being an @$$. I can't believe he'd do something like that to his own hikari, though. ::sniff:: Please get the next chapter out soon!! Ja ne, minna-chan. | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] |
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