| "Not Who They Seem To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: shadow cat On: November 02, 2002 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WANT MORE! please its very good. i want to know what is happening. more please!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sailor_Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SailorChibi: It's good!!! Don't re-write it!
Himeko: She's right, it IS good. The only thing is, you should have Tea die instead.
SailorChibi: Yamiiiiii..., why can't you be nice? Oh, never mind. Anyways, it's really, really good so continue, please! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 00:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooo... Tea's a baaad baaad little girl... knew she was too cute to be good. More, please! |
Reviewed By: Dark Magician Girl On: October 26, 2002 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic.I love Yami/rape fics,but you need some work with personalities.(Thanx for putting Tea in the hospital,please oh please let her die!!) |
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 18:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, chapter 8 was certainly a twist. Although I never knew Bakura had the ability to go into people's minds. Then again, if he can erase memories...who knows? Good job once again. |
Reviewed By: Yin-Yang On: October 26, 2002 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOh more plz!! Whyon earth is tea in yami' head? and what about bakura! eee!! pla u gotta hurry with hte next cahpter1 you're leaving me on he edge of my seat! *fidgets in chair* |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is there no 11? I wanna give you 11s! Oh well, I'll just give you a lemon eventually. Or do you prefer 11s, since I'm a crappy writer?
Anyway, continue continue continue. Hurry hurry hurry! NOW! Onegai? |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whaddya mean, nearing the end? You mean this isn't gonna go on forever and ever? Sniff! You mean lil person. I want more. Oh God, I am so stuck for your lemon. No, wait a sec, not anymore.
So, you mean that Yami's soon gonna be cured, right? Does that mean there'll be a lemon for him and Seto. Any lemons? Onegai? Lemon? Lemon lemon lemon lemon lemon lemon lemon lemon? C'mon, I know you want one. Besides, you right lemons sooooooo good, so I want one, and get writing anyway. Ergh, I need a lemon now. I think we might have a grapefruit in the fridge, but I'm not sure if it's still dead... It might just be alive.
Sorry for rambling, I'm not even hyper.
As I said, this is really really good. So, is this a flashback or something? For the italics. I suppose we'll know soon...
DON'T EVER END THIS STORY! IT'S TOO GOOD TO BE ENDED!!!!!!!!! Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! |
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work again! I genuinely love this story, keep up the awesome writing! |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh okay, I get it! I must say that it is quite difficult to read in italics, but if one thinks about it, one discovers that it is quite like reading in normal font, if you sill allow such categorization.
So anyway, be on soon, c ya then!
I'M ON HOLIDAY!
So get writing, I need to read. |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 16:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^ Kawaii!! Poor Yami-kun, though. T.T Poor, confuzzled lil Yami-kun. I want to see what's going to happen next!!!! Can't wait for the next chappie. ^.~ Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 18:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Awesome chapter once again! love your writing, love it! |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!!! It's the next chappie!!! Oh, dear. Now you've made me feel bad for Yami-kun. ::sniff:: I dun know who to be mad at now. ^^;; I'd guess that Ryou would call Yami Bakura "Yami," and Yami Yugi ... well, "Yami Yugi." ^^;;;; I think I've managed to confuzzle myself. ::sigh:: That seems to happen a lot. Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 15:52 CDT
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i meant so... sorry... looked awful, besides, this fic deserves as many reviews as it can get! |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
still for the italics... sorry...
oh, this is just so great! poor yami too. both of them. in fact, poor all of them! so, when does the joeyxyugi happen??? oh i'm no impatient!! |
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