| "A Fusion of Worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Davis On: January 18, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is very suspenseful. U shouldnt have let chichi die that was the wrong thing to do...but u do need more death in there haha ok well not really more dead and i like the detail through out the entire story..so far. So over all it is very good |
Reviewed By: Taki On: October 31, 2002 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only up to Chapter 5, and liking the story so far. Furita is a funny name. Kinda sounds like this oatmeal my ma eats. Sides that name, the story is great
-Takiro |
Reviewed By: Serrated [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
These are just my opinions on my first fanfic.
Please read and review for me.
Otherise, no more updates. |
Reviewed By: Serrated [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
These are just my opinions on my first fanfic.
Please read and review for me.
Otherise, no more updates. |
