Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 19:38 CST
Comment/Review:
It was a very good story...I will continue to read it. But you really should take down the repeated chapters...since I believe that there is only like 1 chapter but you posted 4 repeat bits of the first one...and even in the first on you repeated an entire section about when they got off the shuttle. Other than that I really liked it. |
