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| "Gohan's Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowies chica! ^^ Great job on this one. Thoroughly enjoyed it. First off, I have to commend you for your originality. I think this is the first (and only so far) fanfiction that I've seen where Lime is one of the main characters. And since I'm on the subject, I absolutely LOVE the character you've given her. I can hardly remember that episode in the series, but what you've written is probably the closest to what I would have pictured her to be as a young adult. Kudos! I also enjoyed the deepness of Gohan's character, which isn't too difficult considering this is Mirai Gohan, but still... excellent job. You've still given him excellent character. Her grandpa is cute too ^^ I can't quite put my finger on which other anime character he reminds me of, but it doesn't really matter. I like how you show that Lime really does respect him and looks up to him, never wanting to disobey or have him thinking badly of her. And the androids! I like what part they play in this. You didn't ONLY use them as an excuse for Lime and Gohan's meetings. They play a continuous part throughout the story... which some authors would neglect to do. Again, great job on this so far. I really can't wait to see what you have in store next. I know Mirai Gohan dies in the series, so my main curiosity is whether you're going to stick with Toriyama's storyline or alter it after all. What's going to happen now that Gohan and Lime have "done the deed" (lol)? Is there going to be a baby in the future? Or will the androids rip their happy little world apart? Ack... my time is being cut short, so I have to end this novel before I had planned. Update soon!! I'll be checking. See ya! | Reviewed By: sinu-yasha On: February 28, 2003 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great fic i'm begging you to please continue this piece. I have no doubt that this is one of the best fanfics i ever read( and trust me i've read many and i do mean many when i say that). -lov sinu-yasha | Reviewed By: Lo On: October 26, 2002 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nicely written fic. I've always wanted to see Gohan paired with Lime, rather than Videl. Nice work. | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmigosh!!! I sat down thinking I'd read another chapter and I couldn't stop reading! It was that good!!! Did I say good? I meant GREAT! I am so no the romantic type, but that was way sweet and romantic. You did an excellent job of keeping Gohan perfectly in character too. So sweet and innocent and sexy at the same time. Wonderful job chica! I would like to see you add another chapter though, to wrap it up more. I mean, is this the last time he sees her? Is this it? Do they marry without Trunks and Bulma knowing? Is he going to take her home with him when her grandfather dies, or will he bring the old man too? I wanna know! Ne way, until you write something eles, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 17:16 CDT
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All I can say is, Wow. I don't know if I've ever said this in a review, but you have this uncanny ability to see into another person's mind. You do such a wonderful job of that, and it really makes your stories worth reading. Unfortunately, I don't have an large amount of time to fully explain why I love this story, so we'll just leave it at, I do. DBZ is about to come on, so I have to go. I can't wait for another few mintues to read more. Until then, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 21:48 CDT
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Okay, I know you have a lot more posted, but I don't have time to read it all at the moment. So far, I'm really liking this. It's very well written and I think you have Gohan pegged. Also, this seems pretty original. I can't wait to have a few more spare moments to read another chapter! Until then, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 20:08 CDT
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Aiya! I've been LOOKING for this fic! I read it before (here or on FFN, I forget) and it was just... awesome! Still is, yo. So like, write some more, man! | Reviewed By: Becca On: October 04, 2002 22:38 CDT
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This is a really gt fic, keep up the terrific work and update soon. gtg bye! |
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