| "1212 Dead End Drive" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Psychotic Fox demon that wants to rule the world and give Spain to her best freind!!!
Reviewed By: CYOA Athrunxyou luver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kao::I like it!!!!! And Joey had a Hula skirt on because it was his fashon statement of the day! Though I'd like to know how they drove in a cardbaord car. Did they like all stand up and shuffle along the road? And how did Joey fall asleep if thats what they did?!?! J::I WILL RULE THE WORLD!!! WAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA CATS SHALL HAVE SPAIN!!!!! Cats:: But I want Tokyo you baka!!!! *starts to beat on J* J::@_@ *is K.O.ed Kao:: Eh heh heh *looks around* Umm Ja ne?
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work! make more chapters soon! Vampire Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: _UsagiGirl_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very...ummmmm.... unique. Everyone interuppted Tristen 'cause he's stupid and no one likes to hear him talk. Joey got a hula skirt from the people who make hula skirts. DUH!! I don't know why he was carrying it w/ him though... or how/when he got it on. One of the mysteries of life, I guess. Keep writing!! (& put Bakura or Malik in!!) ~~_UsagiGil_~~
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Reviewed By: Shadow Kitten 9831 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fic so far.
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Reviewed By: irritating_sonata [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My personal opinion on the hula skirt is a group luoau(said lue-ow, but I don't know how to spell it) was about to start before Yugi got hit by the letter. The reason Joey already had his was because he had planned the thing, knowing how weird he is...
P.S Great story! Keep going...
P.S.S Mai and her dumb death! I wanted to see the hula dancing...:( Just joking! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 20:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
U wrote pretty good for a prologue. Write a chapter and we'll see how good you can write long amounts of writing. Enough of me critizing u, write on Kitty Hino! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: BAKURA'S GURL On: October 05, 2002 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD FOR A PROLOGUE BUT YOU NEED TO STOP TALKING TO THE CHARACTERS KEEP WRITING
^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got my attention. I'm impatient to read the rest. Hurry please. |
