| "Rage of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: M allrat On: December 30, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm having to put a space in my name because someone else is apparently using Mallrat when I already posted a review using the name Mallrat. I throughly enjoyed the story and liked the way you strung it along and the epilog was the best part of the story, I big laugh out of it. Please post more stories soon and keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: chrismking208 On: March 24, 2003 11:22 CST
Comment/Review:
i would like to see more of this story it would be nice to what happens next |
Reviewed By: Ray On: February 05, 2003 21:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story. I liked how you slowly revealed the problem. However, I suggest that you give more background then what you did here. Also, I hope you will make series of this some day. If you do I will read it. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its nice and all....but can you do a fic explaining when Takato and Ruki got together?
Good fic |
