| "Dark Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: emma1 On: October 15, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it was a reallly gooooooood story i hope you update reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllllly sooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn cauz i cant wait its really good
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Reviewed By: milla_ miko On: July 25, 2003 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this story u have to update I am living in utter suspence |
Reviewed By: iggy On: June 11, 2003 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is agreat fic when u get ch.7 could u send it to my email address? Jaislinn@yahoo.com thanks again great fic |
Reviewed By: milla On: May 07, 2003 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your story was inventive and original and honestly had me clinging to my computer chair for more. I never read fics that are incomplete becuz I hate the wait. But I read yours and it proves me right I DO hate the wait. I gave your story an over all 9 (believe me that is gooooood) I enjoyed that is was set in a different time period I like that Mamoru is so OBSESSED w/ her. I like that you added in the passed lives thing it was so unexpected and I thought it most enjoyable. I love the aspects of the story so far, how they met was great too. And If I don't say so myself your are of my personal favorite lemon writer's your style fits exactly what I like in a lemon story. So one more thing HURRY W/ THE NEXT CHAPTER. |
Reviewed By: sailormoonnelly On: December 21, 2002 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wicked cool! Now I don't like Mamoru because he seems sorta cheesy and too nice. I could get used to this dark Mamoru. WRITE THE ENDING PLEASE!!! Hey! Email me at sailormoonnelly@ aol.com I only do this when I see that the writer is very skilled |
Reviewed By: Star On: November 19, 2002 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was really good. I hope that you continue and finish it. Please do. I promise I'll continue reading. |
Reviewed By: kima On: December 04, 2002 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful story. I've reread this twice and still think it's perfect. |
Reviewed By: kima On: December 04, 2002 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant! Amazing! Fantastic! I could go on and on. |
