| "Jungle Diaries - Amazon Adventure 2002" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Dark Lord of Diaries ^_^
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 13:12 CST
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Hmm...I wanted to disembowel Carlos for doing that to Pedro...still do actually, but he's not my character so I can't do that. Oh, and it was pretty good. Definitely worth the significantly shorter wait :P
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Title: Dark Lord of Diaries
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 13:12 CST
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Hmm...I wanted to disembowel Carlos for doing that to Pedro...still do actually, but he's not my character so I can't do that. Oh, and it was pretty good. Definitely worth the significantly shorter wait :P
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Reviewed By: Ryan Griffin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 22:23 CDT
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Jungle Diaries begins late August to early September of 2002. I thought that was clarified, but I guess it isn't. I ask that you clarify your last sentence. Are you asking me to use Japanese names (I do), or asking if I am, or criticizing me for using them?
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: September 21, 2003 23:21 CDT
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This fic should take place before Digimon world Tours and after Wormon dies! You did research well on the Brazilan culture,mind set,etc very well. I would like to see apperance of Black WarGreymon in this fic if it takes place after Oikukama/Vandemon's death later on. Usde the Janese names for digimon not Amerian ones.
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Reviewed By: Ryan Griffin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 19:42 CDT
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(Insert the sound of Homer Simpson yelling "D'OH")
I refer to the disclaimer at the bottom of Volume I. I can research, but at some point it's guesswork. And, it seems, I guessed wrong.
Any information that you, or anyone else for that matter, can give me on Brazilian schooling or Brazilian life in general would be much appreciated. My e-mail is griffinguy24@yahoo.com. |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 12, 2003 15:59 CDT
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James seems to have managed to be placed in the most prejudiced school in Brazil. I have a good friend for whom going to Brazil for a year is something of a family tradition. Both he and his brother have gone, and both of them have had nothing but good things to say about the experience. Not to mention the tradition started with their dad going when he was a kid, and he liked it enough to send his kids. Granted final year in highschool is quite a bit different than final year in grade school, but I still think the class manages to be prejudiced far above the average. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos On: July 12, 2003 12:55 CDT
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Sorry for my review before... I see your fic has REALLY gotten good...
All along a great edition to Lord Archives "Diaries" universe
I cant wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: July 11, 2003 21:56 CDT
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Sweet! This was a long time coming, but it was very good. |
Reviewed By: Canis Black On: March 04, 2003 08:45 CST
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Great story. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 02:00 CST
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First off....
If James cannot speak a language very well, and he is practicing it while speaking to another person, he would be speaking in broken lingo...
Think Shan pu from Ranma 1\2
Also, Hida Iori possess the Digimental of Knowledge so how can James possess it as well?
I like the Idea of the fic, however.... It needs a little more effort. It maybe set in the universe of Lord Archives "Red Digivice Diaries" however...it sounds like your basic Digimon fic
SOrry for the flame, I just wanted to point out what I saw was wrong in my oppinion...take it as you wish. |
