| "The strand of blood and tears that bind" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Kelly On: August 01, 2003 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has got great potentail please continue. |
Reviewed By: beheene On: May 07, 2003 04:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
a damn good fic. hope you continue it some day(hopefully SOON!!!!) |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 17, 2003 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, AS USUAL! I _adored_ this fic wholly...it was written very well. :) |
Reviewed By: Klaus On: January 08, 2003 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, but where's the sequence?!!! |
Reviewed By: Tsunami On: October 18, 2002 10:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
How nice to see an update and get more of the story - both past and present. In the past Yohji seems to have had a lot of things moving against him. In the present - I wonder how much Crawford is figuring out. Thanks for continuing. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Talyssa On: October 14, 2002 01:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good thing I decided to add a review! I saw your comment. Sorry about the no contact info thing, I should probably just sign up for a damn account.
The unfolding story in this new chapter was great by the way. Theres just the right blend of present and past, in just the right amounts, yanno? sometimes with this sort of fic I start to get confused or bored but not with this one, so far. keep it up. Here's my email by the way
amaralyssaofamar@hotmail.com
I'll try to go back and point out the grammatical things I noticed but i prolly won't get around to it as I've got TONS of essay writing and research to do. (College, blergh!)
but feel free to contact me!
Love, Talyssa |
Reviewed By: Tsunami On: October 11, 2002 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the your portryal and the line that inspired it: "The Angels must be mourning the loss of one of their kind for he is lying down in this silk laid bed, ready and waiting for the crimson headed demon to claim his soul and heart for his own." |
Reviewed By: sara-chan On: March 27, 2003 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. this fic is just GREAT!
I can't wait till the next chapter is up. |
Reviewed By: tmelange On: October 08, 2002 12:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
his was enthralling! I'm dying for the next part. Hope to see more soon. |
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate doing this commenting in the review but Talyssa you left no way for me to contact you. Anyway yes please point out my grammar and etc to me. Just click on my name and it will take you to my profile and click on Email. Make the subject Grammar, and if anyone else reads this please do the same. I will soon let you know if it is what I wanted or not.
Thanks for the comments everyone it is very much appreciated.
Shaeric |
Reviewed By: Talyssa On: October 07, 2002 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I noticed a lot of grammatical errors, tense changes, things like that. If you want, I can go through and pick them out for you sometime.
As for the story itself.... WAH!! I really like it. I know the reincarnation idea isn't new but i really like reincarnation stories all the same, generally. You also tossed in the demon/angel thing (in a twisted way) which was neat and LEATHER! ~_~ w007. can't go wrong with leather can ya! next chapter soon???? (and more of your other story too please!) |
Reviewed By: Yochan On: October 06, 2002 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is interesting. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Catlin here On: October 06, 2002 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove this and I hope that you writ the next chapter soon because I want to know now what else is happening and why the blood and tears is being repeated. I am not very patient. ^_^;; Keep it coming and soon pleas. Love aya as the demon and yohji as the golden.
catlin (phoenixen001) |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 12:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting start! I like reincarnation stories. Yes, I imagine breakfast the next day for the two will be mighty awkward! I hope we see a new part soon. :) |
