| "The Dream Within" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 24, 2002 10:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey awesome fic dudes make ore chapters make it a bit longer..just a bit..whoa that sounded wrong lol. |
Reviewed By: salamander On: November 10, 2002 14:43 EST
Comment/Review:
hi could you please up date your fanfic i really want to know what happens next ok
bye. |
Reviewed By: salamander On: November 10, 2002 14:41 EST
Comment/Review:
hi could you please up date your fanfic i really want to know what happens next ok
bye. |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
i just saw a few mistakes but that were small but its really good. hmm psychotic bitch? hn ive been called that before. keep up the good work ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Aya Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 10:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great so far!!! Please write more soon. As a matter of fact A.S.A.P.!!!
Aya Chan(mm member)
Ps: Check out my fic Aya/Kakarrot Lemon(^.-) |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I've actually never read a DBZ fic where Bulma was a fighter. I think it's very original and it's a lot better than mine ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sirencirce [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. I think this is really creative. I usually don't like fics where Bulma is a fighter, but this one has really changed my mind. You have to continue for the sake of all that is good in the world! |
Reviewed By: xtraruffrider@aol.com On: October 06, 2002 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tyte!!!!keep it comin i like da cold then nice attitude on bulmas part! and da strong human thing is so power to da ppl! i gave u ur props now for da hatin part. umm how did bulma kill those ginyu peepz??how did she feel?? my sister is a language arts teacher.wut happened to her popz? wut happened to her mom?how was their planet ever useful to freeza?? was she a princees?was she very rich?? come on!! can i get a little more detail here?!!!
~`much love`~ |
Reviewed By: RheomeB@aol.com On: October 28, 2002 18:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this fanfic but im not all that for lemons. i can't wait to find out what happens |
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