| "The Dream Within" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2012 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a great story hope you do finish this one day |
Reviewed By: Annaxx On: March 06, 2008 15:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
giiirl this story is amaziiing, are you ever gonna finish itt? loove you
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 15:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo!!!! where's the rest. damn it this was getting GOOOD!!!
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 08:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, VERY original. I'm glad that Bulma has a bit more power and control in this story, unlike some B/V's. Wow, your story is so different to the one I'm writing right now, it's nice to have a change of scenery ^_^ Keep up the good work, and thanks for reviewing my fic. Just a few errors in there, though it's nothing big.
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 00:39 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original, interested to see where you take this plot. I can' wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Warui Kitty-Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 23:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! This is a really good fic. I just started reading it. That was really mean to end the last chapter like that! PLEEEASE update soon. Lemon kudasai! Por favor! S'il vous plait!
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Title: Mela989898
Reviewed By: Mela989898 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2003 21:43 EDT
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I Will be update soon!!!!! My compute died and I just now starting to recover from the lost so you just this next update will be will worth it!
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Reviewed By: Tiffany On: January 10, 2003 19:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT....SON OF A....THAT...THAT... MONSTER!!!
POOR BULMA! It must of been HELL in that room, Frieza really beat the crap out of her :(
I hope Vegeta trains hard and attains Super Saiyan to beat the hell out of Frieza then kill him, and rescues Bulma! :)
PLEASE HURRY AND FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER, BECAUSE I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR FANFIC!!!
Tiff |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 10, 2003 08:32 EST
Comment/Review:
Is Dodoria going to find Vegeta? Please update soon, this is good! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 04:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG awsome so far please post more soon ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 10, 2003 02:04 EST
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Heh heh, Vegeta's reflection on his encounter with Bulma was hilarious. This is good! |
Reviewed By: Mariah Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 19:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a question. Why in the hell do you only have 12 REVIEWS? I know on ff.net you had more reviews then this! I can't stand the vistors on this site. God, I can't stand them, exactly why I prefer ff.net, if they hadn't banned NC-17,we would have sum great fics on there. |
Reviewed By: Rylee Leigh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good god girl you've been busy. Well i came out of hiding to read and review your story. Its a good thing you've got going here. I mean its original and all. I like it a lot. See if u can email me when the next chapter's out. @ Sweetpink731@aol.com
~Kira Anne~ |
Reviewed By: Desirae On: December 13, 2002 21:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had I judged the whole story based on the first chaper I would have hated it, Her snapping the kids neck was just wrong,Soory.
However I kept reading and over all I loved it, I really hope you concider writing more. I loved the way you captured Goku's Opps I mean Kakarot's unique personality.
The blissful moron he is(;p) I loved it and him.
Vegeta was well,VEGETA *smiles*
ChiChi reminded me of #17
I figured Raditz would be the first to go.
Yamcha is normally there just to fill space, either way I liked that you gave him a part, as I am a Yamcha fan. As well. Desirae |
Reviewed By: Famke On: December 11, 2002 22:30 EST
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AAH!!! I loved it! You completely threw me off becuase for sure I thought something else was going to happen. Man you are completely ambiguous. I love you. That was excellent and wonderful and magnificent and every good word you can think of. Thank you for not sucking. Good luck in the future and write more soon. |
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