| "The Dream Within" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 04:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG awsome so far please post more soon ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 10, 2003 02:04 EST
Comment/Review:
Heh heh, Vegeta's reflection on his encounter with Bulma was hilarious. This is good! |
Reviewed By: Mariah Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 19:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a question. Why in the hell do you only have 12 REVIEWS? I know on ff.net you had more reviews then this! I can't stand the vistors on this site. God, I can't stand them, exactly why I prefer ff.net, if they hadn't banned NC-17,we would have sum great fics on there. |
Reviewed By: Rylee Leigh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good god girl you've been busy. Well i came out of hiding to read and review your story. Its a good thing you've got going here. I mean its original and all. I like it a lot. See if u can email me when the next chapter's out. @ Sweetpink731@aol.com
~Kira Anne~ |
Reviewed By: Desirae On: December 13, 2002 21:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had I judged the whole story based on the first chaper I would have hated it, Her snapping the kids neck was just wrong,Soory.
However I kept reading and over all I loved it, I really hope you concider writing more. I loved the way you captured Goku's Opps I mean Kakarot's unique personality.
The blissful moron he is(;p) I loved it and him.
Vegeta was well,VEGETA *smiles*
ChiChi reminded me of #17
I figured Raditz would be the first to go.
Yamcha is normally there just to fill space, either way I liked that you gave him a part, as I am a Yamcha fan. As well. Desirae |
Reviewed By: Famke On: December 11, 2002 22:30 EST
Comment/Review:
AAH!!! I loved it! You completely threw me off becuase for sure I thought something else was going to happen. Man you are completely ambiguous. I love you. That was excellent and wonderful and magnificent and every good word you can think of. Thank you for not sucking. Good luck in the future and write more soon. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 24, 2002 10:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey awesome fic dudes make ore chapters make it a bit longer..just a bit..whoa that sounded wrong lol. |
Reviewed By: salamander On: November 10, 2002 14:43 EST
Comment/Review:
hi could you please up date your fanfic i really want to know what happens next ok
bye. |
Reviewed By: salamander On: November 10, 2002 14:41 EST
Comment/Review:
hi could you please up date your fanfic i really want to know what happens next ok
bye. |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2002 17:26 EDT
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i just saw a few mistakes but that were small but its really good. hmm psychotic bitch? hn ive been called that before. keep up the good work ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Aya Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 10:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great so far!!! Please write more soon. As a matter of fact A.S.A.P.!!!
Aya Chan(mm member)
Ps: Check out my fic Aya/Kakarrot Lemon(^.-) |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2002 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I've actually never read a DBZ fic where Bulma was a fighter. I think it's very original and it's a lot better than mine ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sirencirce [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. I think this is really creative. I usually don't like fics where Bulma is a fighter, but this one has really changed my mind. You have to continue for the sake of all that is good in the world! |
Reviewed By: xtraruffrider@aol.com On: October 06, 2002 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tyte!!!!keep it comin i like da cold then nice attitude on bulmas part! and da strong human thing is so power to da ppl! i gave u ur props now for da hatin part. umm how did bulma kill those ginyu peepz??how did she feel?? my sister is a language arts teacher.wut happened to her popz? wut happened to her mom?how was their planet ever useful to freeza?? was she a princees?was she very rich?? come on!! can i get a little more detail here?!!!
~`much love`~ |
Reviewed By: RheomeB@aol.com On: October 28, 2002 18:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this fanfic but im not all that for lemons. i can't wait to find out what happens |
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