| "Otoko Onna: Tomboy" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Title: Otoko Onna: Tomboy
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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Reviewed By: NewVR On: June 04, 2005 20:27 CDT
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kinkyy ! (=O
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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: Pannychan#1 On: February 06, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the fic keep going!!!!*__~
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Reviewed By: hana maru285 On: December 04, 2003 14:54 CST
Comment/Review:
hehe. whhope its hana-maru285@comcast.net my bad. oh well now you have another review. i hope you do contineu soon though
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Reviewed By: hana maru285 On: December 04, 2003 14:52 CST
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Hey, why dont you continue this? i loved the story when it was on ff.net. i didnt know you posted it here. i hope you continue. i really so. and e-mail me so i can review. ( hanamaru285@comcast.net)
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Reviewed By: babe_galanime On: September 26, 2003 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man dat was relli good. so plz continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Ðäñtè [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the lemons need some work but its real good,i like the plot an all that stuff. |
Reviewed By: Princess Serenity Usagi Son [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPPI!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jamie On: April 29, 2003 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm your brother. So I know the truth behind this fic and how it was inspired. You little pervert. You know how you got the idea for this story. And how you got the details just right. Almost like you have experience in the subject!! (Hint hint!!) |
Reviewed By: inudbz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write another chapter please! |
Reviewed By: Princess Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've gt a good fic, but you need to update. It makes me feel ??????? to read this fanfic! |
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover On: February 07, 2003 18:42 CST
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It's about time you updated... |
Reviewed By: Liger Yugi On: January 27, 2003 18:58 CST
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Your a FREAK girl(in a good way) your husband must be a happy man, like your other fic can't wait til the next chapter and your inuyasha story too. |
Reviewed By: nicole On: January 26, 2003 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it more please more |
Reviewed By: Bulma 25 On: January 07, 2003 02:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, either your native language is NOT English or you are lazy whooo! Fix it honey! One tiny error-
"blow" is cocaine! if you are talking about oral sex, that's either, "being blown" or "getting a blow job" ! Getting blow on the job is doing cocaine! Getting blown at work is oral sex! |
Reviewed By: Bulma 25 On: January 07, 2003 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell? Leave the stupid "song" out of it! It isn't at all as effective written down as it might be as music. You just killed what could have been a good fic. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 15:21 CST
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WOO-HOO! Was that good or what!? It had me on the edge of my seat! Great job! |
Reviewed By: April On: January 02, 2003 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic can't wait till next ch if there is one |
Reviewed By: James Williamson On: January 01, 2003 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is so tight. I got really really horny. Can I fuck you? please. If you can write like that then I bet you can screw alot better. e-mail me back. XcaliberDoggX@aol.com |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 05:52 CST
Comment/Review:
hey this is going great! You havent updated for ages! Please dont abandon this fic Im really enjoying it!! |
Reviewed By: Ako On: December 27, 2002 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done |
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
cool |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 11:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, I liked it very hot. What will they do next?What will the fairies do next? New location, new clothing and new moves? |
Reviewed By: MajinKai [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely writen! |
Reviewed By: crazyraditzlover On: October 07, 2002 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your fic |
Reviewed By: young geezer On: January 06, 2003 13:13 CST
Comment/Review:
great so far. Just wondering why you keep updating but no new chapters show up?? |
