| "Yue's Time" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Yue's Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Yue's Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Yue's Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Yue's Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can you write this story on www.adultfanfiction.net
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Title: Yue's Time
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 15:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: butterflydreaming [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just exhausting to even attempt to read. You could *at least* paragraph break when you change dialog. Some description of what is happening beyond "he changed into Yue" would be nice, too. I suppose there are sex scenes buried in here, but I'll never get that far. Skimmed over the openings of the later chapters, and it didn't look any better.
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Reviewed By: Trash Guy On: May 18, 2004 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is wrong in every way, shape and form
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Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Er, who the hell is Julian? Is that the English dub name of Yukito Tsukishiro? |
Reviewed By: chery dragon On: July 23, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totaly loved your fic it was awsome I so hope you write more!!! |
Reviewed By: Clarreese On: July 18, 2003 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fanfic mainly becase of your creativity, but I had a hard time reading your fanfic because of a few spelling errors, but overall your fanfic is great. Just keep up the work. And, one more thing, whats keeping chapter 4 so long? If your not writing one, can you just e-mail me at www.CherryBlossom1001@hotmail.com I'd really appreciate it. And if you have a website, give me a holla.
Always, Clareese |
Reviewed By: Wynter On: March 12, 2003 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on there has to be morrrrreeeeee^_^
Looking towards reading more |
Reviewed By: Dialn (to friends) On: March 04, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i want more smut!!
and your fic was great |
Reviewed By: Angelina W. On: December 09, 2002 03:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who knew that Yue was that side to him! |
Reviewed By: Sakura (it's my real name ppl) On: November 10, 2002 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want more smut!!! lol update often! I wanna read! like sesshou said, 17 cock? 3 around? OUCH! lol laterz |
Reviewed By: chibi tenshi On: October 12, 2002 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love this fic iread it on ff.net and i love the sex seens but i want more smut!!! your getting better as you go on! |
