Title: *puddle of melted reviewer* Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 00:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hello. I am mush. I was once an otaku reading a story at her computer. But now I am mush. Thank you, the mushy comminuty is increasing and Kami-sama if this is the level of hot, steamy, fucking awesome fictions that you write.... CAN I BE YOUR SLAVE???????????? Oh my goddess that was so totally freakin' awesome!!!! I adored it soooooo much! I swear, my knees are actually weak right now. I must have just gone deathly silent, just reading so desperately... *melts* Please write morreeee!!!!! Please!!! The Shido plushie will love you... don't you want his love???? Seriously, your writing style was wonderful, and so incredibly detailed. A lot of the time with vampire stories, people forget to cover certain issues, and *winces* it makes it harder to swallow- BUT NOT YOUUU!! *glomping* You covered so many issues, and you even used that wonderful perenatural factor to cover multiple orgasms... poor mortal men... never get as good sex as Shido and Cain. *floats off to see if you've written more NW stuff.* Love ya! Feel free to drop a line sometime. I would love to see more of your works! ~.^
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