| "Totally lost in love" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: *Tenshi* On: February 25, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot is okay. But there are way too much spelling and grammer mistakes. But I did enjoy it though, so, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Falcony32 On: December 15, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. Update.
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Reviewed By: Falcony32 On: December 15, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job. Update.
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Title: EEEEEEE
Reviewed By: Gotens ssj gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2003 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
An orphen fic!! Orphen *sighs* he's so dreamy...
I've only just started to see the series... up to episode 6 or 7 but I missed one in there...
still I love the idea that you have for the fic.
Keep up the good work I'd like tosee more of this eventually.
~J'dee |
Reviewed By: moonbrat108 On: January 26, 2003 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please continue!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: angelprncss On: December 17, 2002 19:47 CST
Comment/Review:
i really like the story so far and i hope you write more and finish it so i can read it!!!!!!
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Ivy On: October 26, 2002 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far, it's a fun read. The style of writing could be a little more polished, but other than that it's great. This is the first of this kind of Orphen/Cleao fic I've ever seen, so I'd say it's pretty original. Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: T On: September 18, 2002 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it once again please finish the story it is great keep it up :) |
Reviewed By: T On: August 11, 2002 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and i love them please write more of orphen and cleo i love them both .great stuff |
Reviewed By: Eternity On: July 16, 2002 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad that someone actually wrote an orphen fic. There aret' enough out there. Good job. :) You kept the characters very in character (if that makes ant sense) |
Reviewed By: moonbrat108 On: July 07, 2002 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
i've looked for orphen and cleo fanfics but i couldn't find any 'til now. i really like the story so far and i hope you will update it soon.please continue it i need at least one cleo and orphen fic!! |
Reviewed By: Dracoqueen On: June 29, 2002 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is truely wonderful to have at least one Orphen fan fic, and the Cleo x Orphen idea just makes it even better (if that's possible). You NEED to write more! I can't wait to read it!
(p.s It's the Sword of Baltanders) |
Reviewed By: angel On: December 16, 2001 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
finally!!!!!!!!!!!a orphen fanfiction!!!!!!yaaa!!!!is better!!!! an OrphenxCleo fanfiction
please, continue, you´ve made my life happy again!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sabacat On: September 06, 2001 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is the first OrphenxCleao fic i've ever seen! i LOVE them! the potential is SO there! this is definitely gonna be a little AU if Childman and Azelea are going to be working together, but that's totally cool! |
Reviewed By: *~*Akemi_Chan*~* On: October 10, 2001 16:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!! OH PLEASE!! ORPHEN X CLEAO FOREVER!!
XD SUCH GOOD STORY!! |
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